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A more in depth review since my last one was written at 2:35 am pacific time. I love how your bringing it all around. Since your pairings are Sango/Kurama and Botan/Naraku, I'm assumeing they get it all worked out. I can see Kurama and Sango working things out becouse a similar situation happened to a friend of mine. Their still together and have 2 more kids. But now Botan and Naraku that's going to be fun to see how you fix that one. Especially with his wife around. Love the story, update soon.

Oh my . . . well that was interesting and most certainly worth the wait. Sango should just buy an outbuilding for the two dogs or say "fuck it" and give them the garage. The bar scene had me reliving mine and my friends college days. I think it was hysterical that Sango put on "I'm To Sexy" for Botan to dance to and vice versa for Sango to have to sing that song. But they both fit so well. I also have to tell you again how much I love the little tidbits you drop all over the place. Hiei still pretend and trying to dilude himself that he doesn't care what Kagome is doing or with whom. And Kurama hanging all over Shiz trying to keep himself away from Sango. Why else would the two be so mad right now. Not that they have any room to gripe. I love the response and reasoning that Touya had about Jin and Kurama as well. But, I have to say this as well though. I kinda feel sorry for Kurama. I mean when you think about it all, Sango was his first real crush, his first real girlfriend (and I think the only real one he's had) the first person he fell in love with. Most people have experienced those things before he did at least as much as you can in junior high and high school. But, he's still going about everything all the wrong way just like Hiei. I think they both need to take lessons from their friends, Yueske and Touya. Let me tell you right now. You are the absolute master of angst. Not only is the girls and guys, but now it's everybody! Shiz, Kaugra, Yukina, Kuzama, Touya and even the kids for heavens sake. And again with the little verb about next chapter. That could be literal and someone or ones are having fun at the beach or a complete landmine laced day especially if the puppies come along he he. Thanks for the great update.

Love the story! You got me hooked!Baby daddy's drama! Please continue......

please update.

hehehehe
(evil laugh)
the plot thickens

Oops sorry missed reviewing for a bit...
I'm all caught up now though. Thank You Thank You THANK YOU!!!
Oh goodness if things weren't complicated before they get more and more complicated with each chapter and new love interest. O.o;
Its so sweet and frustrating at the same time. Definitely keeping my interest.
Thanks again for sharing and I hope to read S'more soon!

woo go sango!!! haha
good last two chapters.
can't wait to see what's going
to happen next

GAH! I cannot wait to read the rest of this!

confrontation confrontation confrontation confrontation confrontation confrontation

Oh, wow! NICE one! I'm still rooting for Hiei and Kagome to find their way back to each other, but even I can't deny that Yusuke is the man on the spot, and he's making all the right moves and saying all the right things. Hiei is waiting too long to make his move. Damn it. But I completely, totally, absolutely LOVED the parts with Sango, Kurama, and Touya! Yay! We found out so much in this chapter. Kurama is still a complete dog. And he and Shiz are actually ENGAGED? And they're having an open relationship? Well, I wouldn't waste my time getting married, in that case. And having already been divorced once, I would think Shiz would be smart enough to avoid that pitfall. The way you had the go-between deliver Sango's message to Kurama was sheer genius!! First, we discover Kurama apparently still sticks his dick in every hole in the wall, then when he didn't come out to talk to the woman, she let it out about him having two kids. Hee hee! Go Sango! And THEN, after he and Shiz have a nice little fight about THAT, they end up at the restaurant WITH those kids!! BRILLIANT! I'd love to see Youko turn on his Dad and treat him to some of those dirty tricks. I like it that he picked up on the fact that Kurama was looking at them in disgust, AND that he was still making his mother sad. And THEN Kurama realized who the kids were. Oh, joy! I hope he wet his pants! Bringing in Touya and giving him a background with Sango where he had had a crush on her was just what the doctor ordered. And now they're going on a date! I'm so very happy! It's going to be a VERY interesting night at the bar, isn't it? I can't wait!!! And I really DO hope you're going to reunite Hiei and Kagome, even if Yusuke is a part of it, too. Would a committed threesome be acceptable in that world? I'm hoping so!! Will Naraku show up for opening night, too? It's going to be GREAT!!!