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for With Love

by LadyShinomori

person hieikag
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is going great please update soon
person akasha
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please update soon!!
person White Kitsune Shiva
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great
person Lady_Minamino
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was awesome. Ok so now the guys know. They need to step up and be men and help to take care of their kids. If there is one thing I hate it is when a guy will not take care of his responsibilities. I see Kurama doing it but I'm a little worried about Hiei. I loved the whole bar scene. That song was perfect for Sango. I had hoped for one of the girls to get into another bar fight but oh well. I can't wait to read more. This story is addictive!
person MIAMax
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next update
person just-me172007
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah i'm glad you finally updated and i can't wait till the next chapter..And i also love the fact that Sango has guys still wanting her, and not the other way around!!And the bar dancing that was funny as hell !!!! So update ASAP PLZ!!!
person CyndeLou
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, great story. I check to see if its updated everyday. Keep up the good work!!
person Tushuri
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it! Amazing writing as always on your part. I'm almost saddend that Kagome didn't get her turn on the bar but I can imagine. I'm, as always, curious about what will happen with the realationships and can't wait to find out what happens next. Amazing writing and I will be looking foward to another update.
person madmiko
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an action-packed chapter! I'll be chewing on that one for days. Loved the set-up for Kurama and Hiei to find out for sure. And I really loved it when Kurama pointed out what an idiot Hiei had been not to notice when he and Kagome were together that she hadn't had a period in months. LOL!! That was brilliant. I can't believe Hiei insisted on going right over and finding out, though. He sure hasn't been in any hurry to see Kagome. I loved the way Sango told Kurama off. I can't believe Kurama told her that just because he didn't want HER didn't mean he wouldn't have wanted his kid. Because he didn't break up with her because he didn't want her -- he broke up with her because he was afraid of how serious a relationship with her would be because he LOVED her. And Hiei really loved Kagome, too, even if he wouldn't admit it. He broke up with her to give her a chance to find the kind of relationship he thought he couldn't give her, right? Only to find out he probably COULD. Neither one of those guys has any right to complain. I was disappointed at Hiei's attitude about Yusuke being with Kagome, though. I thought he hadn't gotten over her. And he sure can't call her a lying bitch -- what did she lie about? I think she was way too easy on him. I want to see some serious, gut-churning jealousy from Hiei and Kurama over the girls!! And I want to see Kurama and Shizuru fight. Has he told her yet that he DOES have two sons, after all? I loved Touya's thoughts about being put on the spot in front of Sangos two exes! But I'm really glad he spoke up. Ah ha! Coyote Ugly bar -- there's the theme. LOL!! but I wanted to see Kagome get up and dance and Hiei freak out. Heh heh! And what DID happen to her last boyfriend? Heh heh! Great chapter! Just what I needed, though I'm hoping to see Hiei start acting like he wants Kagome back. And for him to DO something about it. (You know how much I love that couple!) And Kurama needs some serious ass-kicking. Bring on the next chapter!!!
person Patty530
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bless you. I was beginning to think you'd forgotten your adoring fans. Wonderful as always. I have hope for Sango and Kurama.