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LUV IT AND PRAY U UPDATE SOON.

The pool scene was funnier than hell, somehow I'm not surprised that Hiei figured out that Botan was playing their group for fools. I see the sexual tension in the group quickly going through the roof though I'm not sure who's going to be banging who first. Kurama makes an excellent manwhore, I think Sango's going to have her work cut out for her if she wants to keep him faithful. Cute chapter, funnier than hell. I'm anxious to see how the story progresses.

Oh this just keeps getting better and better. Now both sides have bets going, what's going to happen when the secret comes out? Now that Sango's got a reason to want to win I think Kurama might want to watch out, I doubt his disinterest will last for very long. I find it amusing that Hiei refused to answer the question, maybe he didn't want to let it slip that he'd already been thinking about bending Kagome over? Can't wait to see how this plays out. Please update quickly.

Just have to add a couple of other comments. This is such a great fic! I was thinking about it, and it struck me that so far we've had some interesting revelations about Botan and her thoughts and hopes, etc, AND some great insight into Sango, too, about her attitude and past experience, etc. But so far, the Kagome info has been more along the lines of things she's said out loud about her and Inuyasha and their pathetic relationship. So, I'm just hoping there will be a little more inside info and a better look into who she really is in the next chapter. The fact that you're going to set her up with TWO guys has me very curious as to how you're going to do it. Will Hiei and Yusuke come to an agreement first? Because she's now set to go after Hiei, right? I hope her friends will be accepting of her being with two guys. I am particularly fascinated with the way you've made them seem so typically "high school" in some ways, and yet you've kept their youkai or miko status. It makes things twice as intersting and opens the story up to a lot of possibilites. And I just HAVE to congratulate you on making Yusuke and Naraku brothers. It really just hit me several hours after I'd read the 2nd chapter what a great match-up that is. Truly inspired. I am so looking forward to more of this!!

great start. sango is my fave and i like it so far. i agree that i want to see her in something sexy just to knock kurama off his high horse. but i like how you have her. she's comfortable with who she is. she doesn't mind following her friend around despite the nickname kurama gave her. nothing wrong with wearing loose comfortable clothing when you are sure of yourself. she's sango so she has every right to be. i think kurama is just pissed off that she isn't falling all over herself and he wants her to. dolled up, easy is his type and she isn't fawning all over him. don't change her personality though. and as far as kagome is concerned just have a threesome sex scene, some raw action. Update please.

Woo hoo! Love your AU set-up! Veeery interesting. Somehow, I never pictured Kagome and Sango as cheerleaders, though. I LOVE your pairings! There's nothing better than Hiei/Kag, and Yusuke makes a nice addition. Botan/Naraku has me intrigued, too. And can I tell you just how much I love Kurama being a man-whore? Hilarious!!! I really liked the way you had Hiei tell them all off after their little pool match. Trust him to have noticed that the girls had to know how to play. I think the way you're writing Hiei and Yusuke is just right, too. I was really surprised that Kag had slept with Inuyasha -- interesting touch there. Hee hee! I can't wait for her to throw him over for a couple of punks!! That will be so awesome!! So, the bet is between Naraku and Kurama over Botan, eh? I DO hope there will be more to Kag than her cheerleader personna. Oh, and Kurama should know Sango has a nice body since she wears a cheerleading outfit, right? Thanks so much for the awesomely long introduction with this first chapter. I am really looking forward to this story!! Very original!!

Love it so far! Can't wait to read what happens next. I'm curious to know how Kagome will break up with InuYasha and make it stick: maybe she'll cheat on him in order to get the point across? And you aren't going to have them assigned to work on a group project in their classes, are you, because I don't think that fits into this storyline.

I love highschool fics and this one looks to be good. Love anything with Hiei/Kagome no matter the setting. I tried to rate it but it's not working but Wonderful Job! Please update soon....

I have only one request since your flow is smooth and there weren't many mistakes. Hard to find a good highschool fic that don't look like the others. So far the plot looks original and I love how you didn't make the girls all prim and proper and stuck up, I really hate that. I just ask that you don't have any of the girl's sappy and all gaga. Also no sappy sex. Let's be honest there is nothing romantic about sex when you are under twenty. Keep up the good work!

OMG!!!!! I laughed my ass off when I read that. I love the way this story is going. Needless to say, I think things are going to get very interesting. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.