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Hey was up? Anyways i loved chapter 4 and can't wait till chapter 5. Poor Sango having to sit on the floor, and has that fat man almost squish her. -LOL- but i loved it, especially the part about the tatoo's really nice!!-See ya!

Awww love the scene for Hiei and Kagome there. Bet that put Houjo's knickers in a twist. I can only imagine what lengths he'll go to in order to win her over now. The fight was interesting too, pity the two fools most likely won't remember it when they sober up. Good chapter, looking forward to more.

Such crude language, such violent behavior and all spiced with just the right amount of sexual tension. I fucking love it!! Been an amazing and entertaining read, can't wait to see more. I'll definately be looking for future chapters.

Chapter 4 was just awesome! Woo hoo! I love it that they went back to the bar, and Botan got to compete in a pool tournament. There really wasn't much Botan, Naraku, or Yusuke in this chapter, but I have to confess, I didn't mind a bit because I'm SO loving what you're doing with Hiei/Kag and Sango/Kur. You could concentrate on the 4 of them and I'd be happy. SO many good things to mention. Loved the guys' reaction when the gals first walked in. And the way Hiei called Kurama on his attraction to Sango. AND the way he fessed up to the fact that he wants Kag. With the way she's going for it, and his willingness, well -- they're bound to win that bet unless SOMETHING happens to delay them. I'm wondering if he's going to offer to take her home from the bar. Of course, it would be nice if they actually got to know each other a little more and started really caring about each other first. The lust is great, but you're already laying the groundwork for more -- Yay! The way BOTH Hiei and Kag were offended when Hojo dismissed him as a possible rival was great! And what's this? Kag's father has already promised her to Hojo?!!? And she doesn't know it? I can see THAT playing a big role later on. And I think it hints at more of Kag's life than she lets show. Obviously, her father has certain expectations of her and she has great responsibilities to him and her family. Like her earlier thoughts about who she dates. I think that many of her choices have been dictated by that. This is going to be so good! Loved Kurama's being an ass leading to him having to give up his shirt. Poor Sango! But I really liked the way she and Kag whooped ass. Were the guys surprised? And the way you have the girls banter back and forth is so wonderful! It's great the way they use it to reveal things -- both true and made-up -- to other people. The Kag/Hiei lap scenes were hot!! And the way you threw Miroku and Hojo into the mix were brilliant. Perhaps Sango can capitalize on Miroku's interest to get Kurama to move. And now Hiei can have TWO targets: Hojo and Inuyasha. (I'm still hoping Inu will try to get Kag back -- loved the way Sango dissed him to everyone when she was building Hiei up as Kag's boyfriend -- LOL!! Gee, will Hiei offer to show Kag just how good he is?) Since Koenma wimped out of the picture so soon, *cough probably gay cough*, will Botan try to get them to let her substitute someone else? Like ... Naraku? So, Kag and Hiei still need to work on their report. And I'm curious as to what role the gals' artwork will have in this? Perhaps to help the guys see there's more to them than great bodies, and they're not just ditsy, shallow cheerleaders? I don't think it would take a lot to develop and show the guy's growing feelings for them -- a little jealousy here, a little protectiveness there, etc. This is just a great story, and it has rapidly become one of my favorites. Thanks so much for updating so frequently and for such great, long chapters! I can't wait for more!

Woo hoo another great chappie. And you even added a sexy Sango to it. Can't wait 2 chapter 4 and hopefully, more sexy Sango, and of course, every one else!

awesome chapter update asap

Oh, that was a GREAT chapter!! Love the idea of Sango and Kag being artsy. It was great that Botan fixed Sango up before she went to see Kurama. Even though I winced in sympathy, I still enjoyed the emabarrassing scenes, too. Loved it that Sango played it off as trying to interest another guy. Loved Kurama's little predicament. Heh heh! Too funny that the teacher called him on being lewd in front of the clay baby -- LOL!! I thought things went really well between Sango and Kurama -- I like the way she started talking to him and put herself out there as a friend. Nice. I really enjoyed the tidbits about how things were going with Botan and Koenma -- TOO funny!! What's up with out little prince? (Apparently: nothing. Heh heh!) I can't wait to see Naraku start working on Botan. Hmmm. Interesting bits of info Sango let slide to Kurama about Kag not being able to cook or write reports. The driving thing is cute, too. I can't wait to see what happens with her and Hiei!! Loved it when the baby shut up when she picked it up and he had the thought that he would, too, if he had his face in her tits. Ha!! I have to wonder, will he make a move when he gets to spend some time alone with her? Or will Yusuke be hanging around with them when they work on their report? I'm still dying to see how the THREE of them come to be together. This is a terrific fic! Thanks for the lovely long chapters!!

lol a bitch luvs to eat and run that was a great chapter.
Ill be waiting 4 the next up date.

Damn, that chap was so sweet. (I mean sweet as in tight,-cool-) OH and i love ur fic by the way, and i hope i didn't come off as a complete bitch last chapter..But the next time u update could u send me a e-mail. You know something like-''bitch i updated, go read and review'' or something like that..See ya!

Hee hee hee! Great chapter! Love all the witty banter flying -- your writing is perfect. Very interesting idea for a home ec. project -- the idea of "animated babies" is just a bit scary. Hmmm. So now the girls have a bet going, too -- it just gets hotter and hotter! Hiei sure is remaining aloof. I'm so glad Kag dumped dog boy. Is he going to cause trouble for her? I loved the addition of Koenma into the mix, but I can't wait for Naraku to make a move on our fair Botan. And I really, really loved the bits about Yukina and Kazuma! That was an excellent touch. This is shaping up to be such a great story -- I'm really enjoying it!!