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for With Love

by LadyShinomori

schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh i'm so glad u updated so soon, and thanx for answering my question. Anyway would it be possible for u to update twice today? Just asking, b/c tyour fic has me checking this site at least twice everday to see if you updated., And i loved i guess lime? with Sangoo and Kurama, and cant wait till the next chapter!!!

Bye!
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter wasn't as long as ur other ones, but still great anyway. And poor Sango, i was so hoping she would win the bet, i guess not. -Shrugs- Oh well, anyways hope u update soon...bye
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great kissing scene. Loved it, I can almost taste the sexual tension between Kurama and Sango. Hope he gets his head out of his ass. At least he finally asked her out. Can't wait to read more. Please update ASAP!
person madmiko
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was another fantastic chapter! I don't know how you keep grinding these babies out so fast, but I'm NOT complaining! It was good to see some Yusuke action in this one. First he saves Kag from Inu, (which I loved, btw), then the great teasing and horsing aropund with Sango, followed by setting Kurama up the way he did. Just awesome! Love Inu trying to get back with Kag. Nice little tidbit about Yusuke and Kag sharing a liking for the same music. When Kurama came to check out the car, and Sango wondered if he was going to woo it or which hole he was going to promise to plug, I thought I'd die laughing! And the call to Karasu was simply inspired, though it's a shame Sango didn't let them think he WAS her boyfriend. (Of course, then we wouldn't have been treated to that steamy kiss.) I loved Sango trying to use Yusuke's finger to blow up her car. LOL!! You were on such a roll! You have a real gift for all this witty banter going on. I just can't wait for more!! I must check this site 3 or 4 times a day (and night) just to see if you've updated. Thanks so much for doing this story!!
person Lady Minamino
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I swear I love your writing. I thought it was so funny the way Yusuke and Sango were playing around when Kurama pulled up. That'll show him! I love all the characters and the way they behave. Kind of reminds me of my sister and me. I can see that this is going to be a very good story once it's done. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work! *pats you on your back* And please let Kurama get a good kick in the balls.
person Kya77
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome, Awsome, Awsome!! Did I express clearly how awsome this story is? LOL I think you are doing a great job and I look forward to reading what comes next for everyone. I wonder how you are going to make it into a Yus/Kag/Heie, but I'm looking forward to seeing how it works out.
person madmiko
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Of course, I still wonder how the evening ended at the bar. Sounds like Hiei and Kag are going to fail that class if she's so bad at writing reports and he's being NO help. LOL!! Love the way you brought on the kiss there. Very hot! Nice, timely interruption, too. Love Hiei's bluntness about thinking about trying to get her into bed. I can't believe she asked him what she did, though. Wonder what she thought about his, "not interested in a relationship, but would probably want to do it more than once" statement? What a cop-out! That just makes him a dog, and I don't see her going for that. Interesting, though, how her thoughts about just sleeping with him to win the bet changed when she realized the intensity of her attraction to him. And if he's had girlfriends before, then what's his problem with dating her if he already knows he doesn't just want a one-time thing? Yep. Their situation is a bit more complicated than Sango thinks, isn't it? Again: there was the hint about Kag having to be home for Sunday dinner for her father -- I just love the glimpses you're giving us about her home life. And I LOVE it that you made JIN Sango's old boyfriend. And the way you revealed more about Kurama's past attraction to her through Hiei's thoughts was excellent. You know, Botan seems to know a lot of horrible things both Inuyasha and Jin did to her friends, but she never told them. What's up with that? She caught Inu with Kik and knew the lies Jin was spreading -- I think she should have told them. Did Kurama ever hear the stories Jin was telling about Sango being so wild? As always, I'll be anxiously checking for updates of this story -- it's just great!
person white kitsune shiva
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u updated so fast i hope u can do it again...and when is yusuke goin to join kagome/hiei
person white kitsune shiva
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey that was great an kind of kinky. Cant wait for the next update.
person Ryu
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn Kurama is such a perv. What is it with him and not being able to go 24 hours without getting his rocks off? I think I'd be worried about it falling off from overuse at the moment. Love how fast you are at updating, keep up the good work