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Alright, I gotta give you props on this. You've managed to take pretty much all the things I don't like about fanfiction, and turn them into something I do. Excellent work! You've got me on the edge of my seat, here, Lovely--I can't wait for more!

OMG, Sango dieing or almost dieing, i swear i had tears in my eyes. MAn that chapter was great and i really, really, can't wait until next chapter. -Also the way Kurama just stood there all emotionless and stuff had me really wishing someone would just kick his ass, and I hope you can somehow make the fool see, how much she really means to him. I.E.-Ex- showing up, Miroku, hell you can even through in more flirting b/t her and Yusuke. ---Sigh----damn that chapter was brillant ....bye!!

Awww man, if that woman had only waited another five more minutes she might have walked up on quite the show. Damn rotten lousy timing. Who does Hiei think he's kidding anyway? If he gets her into bed I doubt they'll be spending much time out of it. Kagome is going to be lucky to be able to walk the next day. Love this scene!

Wow Yusuke to the rescue twice in one day. Gotta love how helped Kags out, I'm sure that Inuyasha was livid from seeing that and Yusuke got the added bonus of holding her. Maybe he shouldhave felt her up while he was at it, just to be more convincing to Inuyasha. Oh and I love the finger seen.. I can think of a few things I'd love to have him do with it lol

I gotta wonder if Karasu might try and make a pass at Kurama later lol just to try and get a taste of fox. Course Sango might beat his ass if he does so that's not an entirely wise idea. KAgs is lucky that Houjo wasn't there this time, she might have started breaking pottery over his head. Looking forward to the new chappie.

Whew! Is it hot in here or is it just your writing? I wasn't expecting Sango and Kurama in the parking lot like that. Interesting little bit going on with Botan and Naraku, too. Kind of a sweet little interlude. Being the most mature of the guys, it seems obvious he is the going to be the first one to recognize that he's heaing into a relationship, not just a fling. It's really funny the way you have Kurama thinking about how he's not going to commit to Sango, blah blah blah, and yet, ... she's on his mind all the time and he doesn't seem to be hooking up with anyone else. (Or is he and we just don't know it?) And then there's the Hiei/Kag situation -- again, he's not interested in a relationship, but he's walking her to class and just hanging around a bit and not pressuring her. Who are they fooling? Just themselves, I think. Do we get to hear anything about Kag's paintings? Loved the two pieces of Sango's you mentioned. It was so nice of you to post more so soon!! I'll keep right on checking for more and more!!

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i...i....LUV U SO FUCKIN MUCH!!!!!!

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

An now I will still my racing heart. Keep up the excellent work.

Yeah, that chapter was great. I was laughing my ass off at some parts, and i'm glad u update so soon. Well now Kagome and Sango both have a chance to win the bet, and poor Botan but at least she has Naraku..Anyways i just have a question and hope u can answer it. Since we all know Kurama's a fox, can he transform in to Youko or is it just Kurama?

YEAH!!! YEAH!!! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! u updated so quickly and gave a peace of Kurama/Sango....Now when is Yusuke/Kagome/Hiei going to start?

I usually hate a/u high school fics with a passion. Thankfully youhave proven that some are worth reading and I'm glad I decided to give yours a try. I love that you have them honestly building relationships and theres no I hate you, lets screw 20 second later moments. I'd beg for an update, but you're doing awesome on that too!