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I WOULD HAVE BEAT THE FUCK OUT OF HIS ASS!!! WHEN I GOT OUT THAT HOSPITIAL. BUT IT WAS STILL THE SHIT. UPDATE SOON!

Yay a lemon between Hiei and Kagome. great job by the way, and i can't wait to see who's on the fight. so i hope u update soon bye!!

Hoo boy! What a way to start the day! THAT was one hot lemon. Nicely-written, tastefully-done, and just plain HOT. But, darn it! I was hoping they'd get to spend some more time there. Wonder who's fighting, and WHY? Is Sango at the party? Hmmm. This chapter was called "The Comparison," but as far as I could see, there was no comparing the two -- Hiei won that hands down. Heh heh. Loved the part about him not wearing constrictive clothing. I also liked the way you mentioned that the guys at school thought Kag, Sango, and Botan had gone wild and slutty because of who they were hanging with now. I also loved the way you showed how Kag and Hiei's relationship has advanced with all the time they've been spending together. You really know how to make this work. Can't wait for meore! Wonder what the others will think about Kag and Hiei's relationship now?

LOVE IT! You have brought my two favorite animes together wonderfully. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks so much.

WHOOT! Go Kagome and Hiei! Well that explains a lot lmao. Aw man who the heck is fighting?! >.< Loved the update,very very nice. Update soon..hmmm the aftermath..^_^

Ok about my last review..i know i seemed WAY to emotionally attached, it's just that happened to me, except it was a pool and not a lake..but anyways great chapter even though i wished she would've thrown his ass out. Oh and more thing, is Sesshomaru going to make an apperance, or is he totally out of the fic?

Aw! That was such a sweet little chapter. I'm so glad she asked to see Inuyasha first. I can't believe he sent Kurama in. Looks like the fox has been doing some thinking, ne? Talk about a turning point in a relationship -- it seems like he's finally coming to his senses. Thank goodness it looks like she's going to be all right, -- hopefully no lasting ill effects. I've really enjoyed the way you've written this, with some lapses in time, yet enough hints to let us know how the relationships have been evolving. Just an excellent, excellent job, and so enjoyable to read.

Very good fic so far. I feel so bad for Sango and Kurama tho. Interesting,update soon. :)

AH! It was SOOOO good! I stayed up all night reading it! (When I should have been sleeping because I have a final today!) Shit. Oh well! I really loved this story! I hope you get the next chapter out soon! (With more Hiei goodness)

Wow! What a shocker! And what a follow-up to the two nice gifts. Hiei sent Kag a teddy bear? The world is coming to an end! And three cheers for older men! Naraku sent Botan a diamond bracelet? Then there's Kurama. What the hell's the matter with the boy? He finally kisses her and asks her out. He has to wait weeks before they can get together. And the day comes, and he craps out. Wonder what the gift was? And I can't believe you redeemed Inuyasha like that!! He went from zero to hero with one selfless act. Heck, give Sango to HIM. (I can't believe I said that, because that's my absolute LEAST favorite pairing of ALL possible pairings. So, give her to Yusuke.) I loved the way he told Kurama off, too. He sure didn't deserve the punch, but I guess Kurama couldn't hit HIMSELF. You did the impossible. You made me like Inuyasha again, and seriously dislike Kurama. You completely outdid yourself in unexpected events with this one. I can't wait to see what happens next!!