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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
rofl!
That beach chapter was hillarious!
I can't stop laughing, that was brilliant,
I can just bet Kurama's kids are going to
have a field day making Naraku's life hell.
lol I can't wait! ^_^
That beach chapter was hillarious!
I can't stop laughing, that was brilliant,
I can just bet Kurama's kids are going to
have a field day making Naraku's life hell.
lol I can't wait! ^_^
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a nice, long chapter! You know, I have to ask: is the sequel supposed to be the same pairings as the original? I had been going on that assumption, but ... I mean, I didn't expect them to all reunite right away or anything, and I HAVE been jokingly (well, HALF-jokingly) urging you to bring in some decent men for the girls, but with Touya and now Kaname on the scene, and Naraku and Kurama still being completely unlikeable, I AM wondering if you still plan to redeem them and bring them all back together. And Hiei and Kagome, too, -- even if it IS with Yusuke along.
Questions/Comments: Did Kagome ever take off her shirt and shorts and show off that white bikini? Because Shishi was staring at her boobs, but no one mentioned the scar. Is it shaped like a little hand? And I hated her ridiculous vanity -- who goes to the beach and doesn't get in the ocean becasuse of their HAIR? And disappoints their little girl because of it? Now THAT'S shallow. I loved Yusuke's thoughts and feelings about hiei getting to know his daughter. Wow! He has relly matured SO much more than the others. I guess fatherhood does that to you. Kagome's greeting left me with really mixed feelings. Was she trying to rub her relationship with yusuke in Hiei's face? That's really petty. On the other hand, I liked that she made Yusuke feel a little more secure about their relationship by not pretending there was nothing going on. So, ... huh. Kurama and his sons. He still hasn't told Shizuru? Why? Does he think he can keep that from her? I can't BELIEVE the two of them are getting married -- they have the freakiest, STUPIDEST relationship ever. Come on, Shiz! You're better than that! Don't settle for so much less than any woman should have to. Her thoughts that he was just a man who couldn't be faithful to one woman are just so much CRAP. He just needs a woman strong enough to MAKE him be faithful. (And of course, that added incentive of "true love," right?) His thoughts about his own sons were really kind of ... sickening. I'm glad Shippou told him that Sango had covered for him with them. Man, he needs to grow up and start taking responsibility for his own actions, instead of putting the blame on everyone else. What a whiner. It's no wonder all of his relationships have just been "flings," (except for Sango and Shiz), -- no real woman would put up with him once they got to know him, no matter how pretty he is and how big his dick is. Heh heh! I can NOT believe Naraku was such an ass! What gall to approach Botan in the water like that. And then his comments during the game, and HITTING her with the ball! WTF?!!? One of those other guys needed to step up and deck him one. Thank goodness Kagome slammed him back after what he said about Botan, but he really should have had to eat sand. And poor Botan! How sad that she feels like all of her relationships were just because of her money. Ouch! That's really got to give a girl a SERIOUS complex. Kaname was an interesting choice to bring in for her. And even Sango had problems there, with not just Kurama to deal with, but JIN, too. I can't believe he practically tackled her to the ground. He couldn't seriously have thought she would give him any. LOL!!Which brings me around to my favorite pair and what was going on with them. I loved it that Hiei went right in and started interacting with his daughter. And his pride in her ability to stay afloat was adorable! It's looking like he's the only one besides Yusuke with any sense. But we still need to see him admit he really had feelings for Kagome back in high school, and that he still does. Then he and Yusuke and Kagome will have enough to deal with trying to figure out how that threesome will work. Heh heh! But him smacking the ball away before it hit Kagome in the face was a good start. He cares. I'll end by mentioning just how much I enjoyed KURAMA getting knocked to the ground by the ball in the face because he was ogling Kagome helping Sango get the sand out of her top. HA!!
Questions/Comments: Did Kagome ever take off her shirt and shorts and show off that white bikini? Because Shishi was staring at her boobs, but no one mentioned the scar. Is it shaped like a little hand? And I hated her ridiculous vanity -- who goes to the beach and doesn't get in the ocean becasuse of their HAIR? And disappoints their little girl because of it? Now THAT'S shallow. I loved Yusuke's thoughts and feelings about hiei getting to know his daughter. Wow! He has relly matured SO much more than the others. I guess fatherhood does that to you. Kagome's greeting left me with really mixed feelings. Was she trying to rub her relationship with yusuke in Hiei's face? That's really petty. On the other hand, I liked that she made Yusuke feel a little more secure about their relationship by not pretending there was nothing going on. So, ... huh. Kurama and his sons. He still hasn't told Shizuru? Why? Does he think he can keep that from her? I can't BELIEVE the two of them are getting married -- they have the freakiest, STUPIDEST relationship ever. Come on, Shiz! You're better than that! Don't settle for so much less than any woman should have to. Her thoughts that he was just a man who couldn't be faithful to one woman are just so much CRAP. He just needs a woman strong enough to MAKE him be faithful. (And of course, that added incentive of "true love," right?) His thoughts about his own sons were really kind of ... sickening. I'm glad Shippou told him that Sango had covered for him with them. Man, he needs to grow up and start taking responsibility for his own actions, instead of putting the blame on everyone else. What a whiner. It's no wonder all of his relationships have just been "flings," (except for Sango and Shiz), -- no real woman would put up with him once they got to know him, no matter how pretty he is and how big his dick is. Heh heh! I can NOT believe Naraku was such an ass! What gall to approach Botan in the water like that. And then his comments during the game, and HITTING her with the ball! WTF?!!? One of those other guys needed to step up and deck him one. Thank goodness Kagome slammed him back after what he said about Botan, but he really should have had to eat sand. And poor Botan! How sad that she feels like all of her relationships were just because of her money. Ouch! That's really got to give a girl a SERIOUS complex. Kaname was an interesting choice to bring in for her. And even Sango had problems there, with not just Kurama to deal with, but JIN, too. I can't believe he practically tackled her to the ground. He couldn't seriously have thought she would give him any. LOL!!Which brings me around to my favorite pair and what was going on with them. I loved it that Hiei went right in and started interacting with his daughter. And his pride in her ability to stay afloat was adorable! It's looking like he's the only one besides Yusuke with any sense. But we still need to see him admit he really had feelings for Kagome back in high school, and that he still does. Then he and Yusuke and Kagome will have enough to deal with trying to figure out how that threesome will work. Heh heh! But him smacking the ball away before it hit Kagome in the face was a good start. He cares. I'll end by mentioning just how much I enjoyed KURAMA getting knocked to the ground by the ball in the face because he was ogling Kagome helping Sango get the sand out of her top. HA!!
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lovely! kurama getting smacked in the face, beautiful. when is him and sango goin to get back together though? isit goin to be threesome between hiei/kagome/yusuke? is botan goin get wit that hot dude with the blue hair?
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love your story!!! im really hoping that one of the kids gets overprotective and shows the guys just how their powers help their mothers.
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the updates I'm loving it
The eating beans and feeding them to the kitten had me laughing so hard I had to read parts of it to my son, who asked "Whats so funny?" he got a kick out of it too without even having to relate it to the story.
Lots of possible directions, looking forward to seeing where you take them. Thanks again for sharing. I look forward to reading S'more.
The eating beans and feeding them to the kitten had me laughing so hard I had to read parts of it to my son, who asked "Whats so funny?" he got a kick out of it too without even having to relate it to the story.
Lots of possible directions, looking forward to seeing where you take them. Thanks again for sharing. I look forward to reading S'more.
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome new chap! can't wait till you get the next one out!
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok fist off, i'm so glad u updated. It's been a while hasn't? Anyways loved the whole beach scene. Especially the volleyball game, and how Kurama and Hiei got to know theoir children a little bit more. So plz update soon!!
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I really like the way you're taking your time and filling us in on all those juicy little pieces about everyone. I like the way Yuseke is turning out with all the thoughts about Hiei getting closer to Mid and him not standing in the way and incouraging Hiei instead. Bobo. . .lmao. That is just to good and I can see her loving every minute of it. I loved her smacking Naraku even though he didn't do anything at that second, he still deserved it. And the fox is still suppose to be the smart one?!? He needs to get his delusion head out of his ass and start doing some major sucking up before Youko a. kills him b. decides to like Touya and rub it in his face c. attacks Shiz just to make him miserable or d. all of the above. I like answer d myself. But, at least he's admitted to himself that he still wants Sango on a sexual level just a few meetings about the boys and the idiot will discover the awful truth about his feelings. I know I love to see the updates, but take your time and keep this thing going the way you have been. It's so unrushed and flow so well it's almost too good. And I can't wait to see who's getting an invite and what Bobo hehe buys.
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. It was a great chapter as always. I look forward to your updates so much that I check every day. :) LOL Keep it up.
Thanks again,
Patty
Thanks again,
Patty
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Kurama still wants Sango. Even a blind man could see that. I love the way things are going with Kagome and Yusuke. I really, really, really, really want to see the kids do something to one of the guys. Please have Mid burn someone. That would be soooo sweet. Please keep updating.