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by LadyShinomori

person madmiko
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Kagome move out. She finally found out about her father's plans for her. Wonder what Hiei will think about it? I have to confess, I was really hoping Kurama would get what was coming to him. HE knows that Sango saw him. I can't believe he didn't even try to apologize, though how one would go about apologizing for what he did and said is beyond me. Loved the tidbit of info about Kagome and Hiei becoming more of a "couple." And it was interesting that Inuyasha was being friendly with them. I liked Kagome's mother helping her out. Dang! I just really want Kurama to do some serious suffering. Valentine's Day coming up, huh? Now THAT should be interesting!
person madmiko
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me again! Had to re-read the last two chapters -- they're just so good! And I wanted to mention how much I loved it that Botan kicked all THREE of the skanks' asses. Loved it that she tagged Kurama right in the face while he was "in the act." Then, of course, she had to nail him right where it counts most. Heh heh! It's great the way the girls are such good friends like that. It's been so hard for Sango to be "just friends" with him, but now she doesn't have to. I still can't believe he had the nerve (lost his mind) to do that in her room. Of course, we all know that the last things he was saying to that girl were things he was thinking of Sango, but why did he feel the need to tell the girls that Sango means nothing to him? He couldn't just say "we're just friends?" What an asshole. He deserves everything he has coming to him. And I really loved yusuke's thoughts about the two girls - that they weren't very pretty and they smelled. LOL!! Seriously, the fox REALLY is a man-whore to go for that with his demon senses. LOL!! I just can't wait to see what you do next -- you've got me on the edge of my seat!
person Patty530
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know again how much i'm enjoying this story. Please keep up the great work and i'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for such a great read!
person EatAPeach
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...you know not many people can pull off Kurama as a total asshat, but you're doing nicely. ^_^ Just thought I'd drop by and let you know I'm completely enthralled at this point and can't wait to see more. Keep up the nice work!
person Patty530
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kurama is an ASSHOLE. But I'm hoping you get him straightened out. He was always my favorite in YU YU. Oh well, Loved it! Waiting for next chapter.
person Kya77
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that is so sad. I hate Kurama for doing that to Sango especailly after all she has already gone through. I so want to know what comes next. I hope Sango makes him crawl to get her back. Till the next update. Keep up the great work.
person madmiko
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! that was painful to read. Good golly, but that was an awesome chapter!! And once again, you managed to completely surprise me. I can't believe Kurama was so incredibly stupid. Sango's right -- no matter what ELSE it meant, the fact that he did it in her room showed such an unbelievable lack of respect for her. And he went ahead and did it even knowing he didn't have any protection. Oh, please -- let him catch something! I'm extremely curious about the "invite" the girls mentioned. Has someone set him up? Who and why? Surely it wasn't Naraku insuring he wins the bet by getting Botan all pissed off at Kurama like that. Man, the things Kurama said, too. And now Yusuke is taking Sango home. Hmmm. What will Kurama do now? Is there any possible way to redeem him? (I know I'M not feeling too forgiving! LOL!!) Man, it's been a really bad couple of months for Sango -- I feel so sorry for her. I don't think it's going to cause as many problems for Kag and Hiei as Yusuke thinks it might, though, because Hiei thinks Kurama's an idiot, too. Hell, just about everybody does now. I wonder what kind of choice Kagome will have to make? Is Hojo going to show up again and tell her about her father agreeing to their match? I'm all nervous about that now. But i think Kagome's strong enough to stand up for something she really cares about, and I think she really cares about Hiei. You've written their coming together just beautifully and in such a great, believable way. Kudos, my friend!! And I think it's simply amazing that you're able to update this so often!!! It's become one of the highlights of my day to check for a new chapter!
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter by the way, i just wish Sango would stop getting hurt. Poor her...And Botan kicking as was sweet..!! Update when u can!!
person Laini
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLT CRAP WHAT AN ASS!..*breathes* ok im better. But man,nice one Kurama,go ahead and fuck things up..*sigh* Nice update,but i feel really bad for Sango. Update soon! ^_^
person BlueFairyGirl
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know i never hated Kurama till now? my god you make him such an ass it's amazing! but i do hope that he doesn't stay this way. anyway good writes