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HOLY CRAP. I cant believe Yusuke did that! lol,that was genius haha. Im so glad they made up..hmmm i wonder what Kagome has to say now. Loved the update,Your doin an awesome job. Update soon. ^_^

I know I've told you how much I love this story before, but it keeps getting better. Keep it up.

Holy hell!!! This is one hell of a story. I can't believe that Sango almost died. I just wish that Inuyasha would have beat the *^#@ out of Kurama. It was in a way his fault. Inuyasha isn't so bad after all. And then for Kurama to bump pelvis' with two skanks in Sango's room is the last straw. Thanks for giving him a good kick in the nuts for me. I really enjoyed that part. Normally, I love Kurama so much but you have a way of making a person really hate him. And oh my God! The roses in the tail pipe was a classic. I was rolling with laughter on that one. I think Yusuke needs to get off his ass and make his move. I can't wait for you to update again. I want to see what happens next.
P.S. I knew Kagome would win the bet. She picked the best man for it.

Chapter was the shit. Ohhhhh i wonder what kind of medicine it is for Kurama? lol. Now im in suspense hehe. Hiei and Kagome are like rabbits lmao. Then again that isnt a bad thing either! :D I cant believe Sango didnt know Yusukes mystery girl is Kagome..or is it? Hmmm. Update soon,cant wait to read more. ^_^

LOVED IT! Keep up the good work. I check every day to see if you've updated, love this story. Please keep up the great work

NICE one!! Absolutely loved Sango stuffing the flowers in his muffler!! Yay for her!! Hmm. You've got me wondering about Naraku. Is he still looking at Botan as a bet, or is that developing into something more? I liked it that Kurama came up and made him a bit nervous. AND, I LOVED it that Kurama was looking for Yusuke to possibly help him with Sango, and ... he's with Sango!! LOL!! I had pretty much forgotten you said this was going to be Hiei/Kagome/Yusuke pairing -- I was surprised that Yusuke would even consider sending Kagome a girft when he knows she and Hiei are an item. Are you still planning to go that way? I'm begging you not to rock the boat with Hiei and Kagome -- I have been loving the way they're workling out! But I assume that's what Yusuke is talking to Sango about, huh? I hope he talks to Hiei before he does anything. Of course, considering the way Hiei's relationship with Kagome has developed, and his thoughts about Kurama and how stupid he's been, I don't think he'd be too keen on sharing the girl he's become so close to. I'll be very interested to see what you do with all this. I've got to ask: since you always have teasers about the next chapter to come, are you writing from an outline? Did you have the whole story plotted out from the start? I am just so amazed that you've been able to update almost every day!! It takes me a week to get a chapter written, and THAT'S with me going from an outline with the whole story already plotted out. So, I think you're doing a fantastic job!! I've really been enjoying your take on the characters and the interesting situations you set up. Oh! And I forgot to mention how much I liked the mentions of Sango's artwork. I really thought that added to the story -- especially when Yusuke and Kurama were looking at her table. And I love it that Kurama went ahead and gave her the present -- can't wait to see what it is!! But it was great when she threw it at Inuyasha and told him to take it. (And I like the way you're keeping him in the story. Nice touch. It was even a little sad that he was a bit depressed when he saw Kagome with Hiei's gifts. I think it's awesome that you haven't felt the need to pair him off with someone else. Not everybody has somebody all the time, and he's needing to do a little growing up on his own. Great job!) I AM wondering why Kagome and Botan didn't tell Sango about Kurama, though. If your best friend caught the guy you like going at it with some skanks in YOUR room, wouldn't you want to know? And wouldn't they warn you so you wouldn't get hurt by such a jerk? I would think they would try to steer her away from him. I am SO looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks so much for sharing this story with us!

lol that shit was funny! luved ure chappies. keep it up.

Awww that was so sweet of Kurama....BUT...doesnt make up for what he did lol. Weeeeell time for Plan B fox! lol. U know i think Naraku is really starting to like Botan...or...hes really good at hiding it O.-. Loved the chappie,update soon! ^_^

Awesome update. Damn Kagomes dad is such an ass -.- lol. Loved it,update soon. ^_^

Its a great chapter. I've already told you how much i'm enjoying the story. I'm glad you finally updated! I will be waiting for the next chapter.