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WHOOT! Go Sango and Kurama!,u know if i didnt know any better I'd say they are going to be as bad as Kagome and Hiei lmao. Awesome chapter. I think Sango and Kurama make a great couple. Update soon ^_^

Okay so I have quite a bit of reviewing to catch up on. Hope that you don't hold it against me lol This chapter was interesting, Kurama is being such a complete asshat that right about now I'd be cheering if Kagome purified him just to spare sango the trouble. It's really saying something when even Hiei thinks someones being an utter idiot. The fox needs to get his shit together and soon. I like the suspensful ending you left it at here, I get the feeling you like torturing your readers with the unknown lol good job

I was a little surprised that she would ask to see Kurama before any of the others. Poor girl has it bad even is she doesn't want to admire the depth of her feelings. Hopefully seeing her in the hospital bed will cause Kurama enough guilt that he'll realize how much of an idiot he's been being. Good job!

YEAH! Go Kags! Looks like the bet has been won easily but I bet she wasn't even thinking about that when he started stripping. Damn lucky girl, he's definitely got the good stuff. Someone needs their asses kicked for interrupting them though. I'd have loved to have seen just what he had in mind for the second round. Great chapter, gotta love it when my favorite couple get a chance to play around

Oh dear god. How stupid can he possibly be? Just when I thought things couldn't get any worse between those two he had to go and do that. Did one of the tarts he'd been doing somehow suck his brain out through his dick? I like how Botan came in though... All three of them needed a good ass kicking but now I'm doubtful as to just how much good its going to do. Obviously that boy is too hormonal to remain in a serious relationship for long. If they ever do get together she's going to need to buy a chastity belt for him. Or neuter him. I'm leaning towards the second option. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

You know I hate to say it but right now I think the only males that hasn't lost their minds might very well be Naraku and Hiei. It's nice to see the firefly hanging around now that he's gotten into Kagome's panties, I was worried he might just up and bail on her since he'd gotten him some. Him walking her to class and all is sweet, Kurama needs to take some lessons from him I think. I have to wonder if Yusuke realizes just how dangerous the ground is that he's treading by wanting Kagome. I can't imagine Hiei taking it too well but then again he's always been hard to predict. Good chapter

Whew! Had to read that through twice. I've said it before and I'll say it again: there's just nothing better than a good, hot Hiei/Kagome scene. That was awesome! I loved your brief, but thorough description of his room -- I could just picture the narrow bed. And her nervousness and excitement at being there alone with him came through so clearly -- I swear, I felt like I was in high school again. You pegged it perfectly. I love the way you wrote him -- he came off so cocky and confident, yet he was thinking he would have to try to persuade her. I wished she had voiced her thought about wanting to see what he could give -- that would have floored him, but only for a minute. Heh heh! You've brought them along so beautifully as a couple -- still finding out things about each other, like his job. I DO wonder what he thought about the Hojo situation. And is that over, or will Hojo be back? Loved the Yusuke/Sango time. I wonder if Sango would encourage him if she knew he was talking about Kagome? (Or is he?) I was surprised he tried to smooth the Kurama situation over, and even more surprised he advised her to try to seduce him. I don't know if I commented on the way he left her flowers in her car, but she was SO right. It was like he was ashamed and didn't want anybody to know -- even if it was just a gesture of apology and not a romantic overture. Seriously, how many times is he going to keep making the same stupid mistakes? He kissed her, got his hand in her panties, called her and asked her out for a couple of weeks, and then has done NOTHING but show and tell everyone how she doesn't mean anything to him. I think at their age, her feelings for him would have finally turned to hatred. I can't believe she is contemplating going after him. And in the next chapter, Kurama is going to get a dose of his own medicine? Hmmm. Do you mean she's going to come at him hot and heavy? (Though I think the girls do that already, don't they?) Or is he going to see Sango with someone else? Oh, I HOPE SO! And I thought you had to have a pretty set plotline to keep it moving so steadily -- I love it when that's the case. Thanks again for the great Hiei/Kagome action -- that made my day! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Dang! Forgot to mention how much I'm loving the Sango/Yusuke friendship, and I'm dying to know what Kurama thought when he saw Yusuke put his hand on her knee. Makes me wonder if the fox is going to be confronting his friend soon. He has no right to, but it would make a helluva scene! Heh heh!

Most excellent!! Great way to bring them back together. I look forward to what you have instore for Heie/Kagome/Yusuke and how they all three come together.

In over ten years of reading fanfic, this is the first time I have ever been compelled to write a review. Excellent work! I believe I am in the company of many others when I say I can't wait to read each chapter to see what you are going to throw at everyone and who you're throwing it at next. I particularly like your snippets on the next chapter. Sometimes they are straight forward and other times down right confusing. The snippet of Kurama learns a harsh truth, does he take Sango and in the process gets confronted with the fact that a good friend has lied for years or is it something completely new and different? Which leads me to some of the various items peppered throughout the story so far such as the comment about Kurama not having protection. Was it put in as a deminstration of how he wanted Sango so much he wasn't thinking at all, did the fox finish the deed and will it come back to haunt him later, or was it simply an act of evilness to drive us all insane with the thought of the possibilities never to be mentioned in the story again? I for one would happily fork out the money to read your work. Keep it up. I'm hard to entertain and your doing a fantastic job. Thank you.