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for With Love

by LadyShinomori

person madmiko
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another good one! Interesting that Inuyasha is calling Sango a lot and being so nice. I love it that Botan teased Kurama about having to fight for Sango. Her telling the girls about naraku was hilarious! But, what's up with Kagome saying Hiei's not huge? I thought he seemed pretty darn huge to HER -- maybe not Kurama's nine, but wasn't she agog at his thickness? And eight is nothing to sneeze at. LOL!! He's keeping her walking funny, isn't he? LOL!! Loved the tidbit about him being gentle with her -- aw! It just gives me goosebumps. And I'm glad she said she wasn't about to cheat on him -- good for her!! And yay for the office sex! I consider this story my own personal Mother's day gift every day -- thanks!!
person Laini
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow Kagome thinking of Yusuke like that..hmmmm,interesting indeed. The office scene w/ Hiei and Kag...lol what can i say? Very naughty lol. Loved the chap,update soon. ^_^
person madmiko
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Great, as always! Loved Kagome and Sango's revelations about the night with the guys. Also loved the way Kurama greeted Sango and Kagome asking Hiei why he didn't kiss HER like that at school -- his answer was priceless! Interesting rumor about Yusuke and Naraku. LOL!! Then Yusuke sat down with Kag for lunch and she couldn't help but look -- I just about died laughing! Interesting tidbit about some of the guys talking about her and Hiei knocking one in the head with a book. HA!! Can't believe Yusuke threw ketchup on her and she dumped the salt on him. And he DID hit on his best friend's girl. What will Hiei say? And whoa, Botan! She went for it, huh? What a nice surprise for Naraku. and how sweet -- he's taking her to the sumo matches. LOL!! Loved it!
person white kitsune shiva
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol...lololol.....lolololololololololol
person Patty530
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I always try to keep my reviews short short. You make it hard to do. I love the what you've done with Kurams and Sango, but OMG Whats Hiei going to do when he finds Kagome and Yuske? Man can;t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
person Laini
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn,well Botan certainly got down to business lol. Omg Yusuke being alone w/ Kagome?!...oh boy,sounds hot lol. Wonder how Hiei is gonna react >.<..lol. Love the fic,ur doin an awesome job. Update soon. ^_^
person Laini
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
URGH! Damn review cutting off! Anyway,Love the fic,your doin an awesome job! Update soon. ^_^
person madmiko
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved, loved, LOVED the fight between Yusuke and Kurama! That was great! And I liked the way she was outside in the parking lot there when Yusuke called her on Kurama's behalf. I still can't believe she forgave him so easily, but I guess we need to get into their relationship, right? LOL!! I really like it that Kagome hadn't told the others she had been with Hiei. Obviously, it had nothing to do with the bet. but I love it that they know now, AND that HE'S calling her, AND they've been together more than the two times. Yeeha! Prom? And none of the guys has actually asked them yet, huh? Just wondering -- is this story going to come to an abrupt end at the end of the school year? Because we're almost there and I don't want to see it end yet -- I'm enjoying it too much! A friendly competition coming up, huh? I'm glad it's going to be friendly. (Especially if it's Hiei and Yusuke competing for Kagome. Got to say, I hope they don't COMPETE for long -- I'd rather they reach an agreement. And I hope that Hiei's feelings for her are as strong as they seem and that he's not just going to NOT CARE if she's with someone else. It really does seem like Yusuke waited too late to get in the game. And I do so love Hiei and Kagome together. Can't wait to see what you have in store for them and US!!) I thought you did such a great job with Kurama's gift for Sango. The way Botan found it was so believable, and the way you wrote Botan and Kagome trying to get her to open it was so real, too. You've got the touch!
person Patty530
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great..Thank God Kurama wasn't such a shit in this chapter. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Thanks
person madmiko
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way you continually surprise me! Not at all what I was expecting, but oh, so good! Who would have thought the competition would between Kurama and Sango? For a minute there, I thought maybe the couples were going to compete for loudness. Heh heh! How nice that the very day Sango and Kurama finally get together, they could spend the night in her house alone -- well, ALMOST alone. Heh heh! I can't believe Kurama just got up and left the room like that!! He should have known how bad that would make her feel, or at least that it would make her worry. Hmmm. THEY'RE not using protection. Hiei and Kagome aren't using protection. They really DIDN'T learn anything in that class, did they? LOL!!! So, is Kurama going to go punch Jin? Interesting little tidbit of info you threw at us there that Kurama had seen Sango and Jin together. (Yeah, I'd like for Jin to make an appearance.) Two down, Botan to go. And you've got me curious again -- wonder what someone is going to take from Kagome? I'm telling you, I'm enjoying this story so much, I'm having trouble working on my own. This is absolutely my favorite fic right now!!