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for With Love

by LadyShinomori

schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl! That last chapter was HOT!!!!!! How in the world did you come up with tickling while having ya know what? I have never heard of that. Dirty thoughts coming to mind. *grins uncontrollably* I was so happy to hear Kurama call Sango his girlfriend. It is nice to know that even the wildest beast can be tamed. And I just it when she decked the hell out of Yura. I laughed my ass off. I can't wait to see if you have her continue to work on her face. I would. What is going to happen since they aren't using any protection? You would think that Kurama would be smarter than that. About the only thing I can say now is UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! Keep up the good work. And also since I wanted Kurama to get a good swift kick in the nuts and you gave it to him; it's good to see that it knocked some sense in him. Love ya girl.
person Laini
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHA,not being caught in a tux,nice lol. Love the chappie,even tho it was short...but hey better then nothin right? Kagome spending time w/ someone else?..and its NOT hiei? Gee i wonder who that could be?...*knowing wink* lol. Update soon,im really enjoying this fic. ^_^
person Ryu
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Sango needs to be a bit more persistant in digging for information. Yusuke's just too damned good about redirecting the flow of the conversation. Personally I like his idea of her crushing Kurama dick but that's just me.. mwahahah Oh my, steamy lemon scene. I just love the way you write the two of them getting it on. Three cheers for the smut!
person Ryu
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gotta say I loved the fight scene in this one. Looks like Yusuke finally gave him the kick in the ass to do the right thing. Lets just hope it doesn't blow up in Sango's face. If it does our poor Toushin might end up getting hurt. Good chapter!
person Ryu
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damnnnnnn what a steamy chapter. Love the moaning competition they had going on there, I can just picture the girls discussing their "adventures" the next time they get a chance to talk. And whats gonna happen when Kurama see's Jin again? Now that he knows it was all a lie I bet he isn't going to be too thrilled when he runs into the bastard. Can't wait to see what happens
person Ryu
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, i hope that hiei does decide to go with that idea of in the school. I don't think he'd have too much trouble getting kags to go along with it either. Of course thats dependent on whether or not hiei finds out about her ogling yusuke's goods. I think i'd be tempted to look too lol and then some... great job!
person Ryu
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao Sango might be right about Botan needing funeral arrangements. If a guy came near me with something that big I might run for the hills lol! Course kags is gonna have to worry about the same problem if her and yusuke ever hook up. We'll mourn the loss of them both lol hot hot office scene. I wonder if karasu is gonna notice that they defiled his office. pervert would prolly get off on it lol
person Laini
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa,nice chapter. God i would have punched their teeth in,both of them lol. Hm what other secrets will kurama reveal about himself? hehe. And what of Hiei,Kagome,and Yusuke? yikes..lol. Update soon,cant wait to read more of it. ^_^
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know i swear u read my mind, i was about to ask why was Kagome the only in the fic getting laid. 'Cause she got laid 4 times (b4 this chapter) and Sango got laid 1 and 1/4 (fingers only count as a 1/4) and Boton only got a 1/2 (blowjobs count as 1/2 if, ur the one giving but 3/4 if ur the one recieving) and then uou added this chappie so yay.. (review for chapter 13-19)..I was out if town, so i just decided to do 1 big review instead...update when u can!!!
person Patty530
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the directiom you're taking Kurama and Songo. Keep it up Please. waiting for next chapter.