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Oh my god those two have no shame LOL I love it. If Kagome isn't careful he's gonna picking public places on purpose just to see how far he can get her to go. Either that or the more forbidden locations.. He seemed to like the desk thing, I'm sure Kagome would get a kick out of defiling her fathers office just to get him back for the houjo incident. Oh and Botan's aunt sounds like an absolute blast. I can just see how much trouble the girls will get into if they go to stay with her. Great chapter

that chapter may have been short, but it was BIG. (Kind of like Hiei. Heh heh!) Yowza! So, Kag is having a little pregnancy scare. Those little sticks you pee on are cheap, she should do it. Naturally she'd be a little scared to mention the possibility to Hiei, but once she finds out for sure, ... Why the heck AREN'T her and Sango on something? The pill, the shot? Those are more reliable than condoms anyway. And I know I've said it before, but your description of their artwork just really adds a lot to this. I would LOVE to see someone draw that painting!! Do you draw? It's really sad that Kagome and Hiei are having such an intimate relationship, and she doesn't even know if he will take her to the prom. and by intimate, I'm talking about all the time they're spending together -- not just the sex. You've made her feelings perfectly clear -- loved the comments Karasu made about Hiei having some hold over her that brings out a passion and intensity in her art. And you've shown in mnay subtle ways that Hiei cares for her, but apparently she isn't even confident enough about their "relationship" to call him her boyfriend. He needs to step up here!! I can't wait to see what kind of surprise Kurama has for Sango. And I'm not going to jump to conclusions like I usually do about your teasers, because I'm always WRONG. So, Kagome might be going to spend an evening with someone else, but I'm not assuming we're talking about anything going on that might put a kink in her relationship with Hiei. But i can't help but wonder who it will be? The obvious conclusion would be Yusuke, so I'm wondering if she's going to end up talking with Inuyasha instead. Or heck, maybe Miroku or Hojo will pop back up. Maybe her DAD will want to spend some time with her. (Okay, I confess, I AM nervous about it!! I don't want Yusuke mussying the waters with her and Hiei now that they're so established. And I DEFINITELY can't imagine her having sex with ANOTHER guy when she's already scared she might be pregnant. And she obviously is pretty much in love with Hiei. AArrrggghhh!!! You are just too, too good at this. The waiting -- even when you update more frequently than any other author I know, is killing me!! Bring it on!)

What else can I say? Loved it! Love how the Kurama and Sango stryline is going...keep it up.

HA! Another gem. Nice beach action with Sango and Kurama. He's into the romance, isn't he? THAT has to be a switch for him. And what's this? Hiei gropes Kagome all the time? LOL!! That girl seriously needs to stop fooling around and find out, -- that way she get on something if she's not before she BECOMES pregnant. Loved the buddying up she and Yusuke were doing. But, whew! They go way beyond simple teasing or flirting with that kind of talk. Heck, it wasn't even the kind of thing to get a girl hot and bothered -- more like disgusted. LOL!! And what kind of a moron is she to think about him like that when she might be pregnant with another guy's baby? I'll definitely grant her the curiosity, but she's got enough on her plate. Loved her point about guys wanting girls to be virgins, but how do they expect that if they're not? LOL!! Interesting that Yusuke is wondering if Hiei knows he's interested in her. I am definitely hoping he has a talk with him soon!! I wonder what Yusuke thinks Hiei's relationship with her is? Does he not think Hiei cares about her, or does he really think Hiei would be willing to share her? (Because apparently, that would ruin her tight fit for him. LOL!!) That little fire demon had better be telling her how he feels soon if his best friend is trying to edge him out. And what's going on with Naraku and Botan? Will Kurama have to cough up $500 soon? You're just doing such a great job with this whole thing! You're still keeping me on the edge of my seat! This story has it all -- humor, angst, romance, suspense. You've got it going on!

Nice,Sango being brazen lol. Kagome and Yusuke...hanging out..conversing....which leads to the topic of sex...*thinks* Odd, lmao. Loved the chap,especially w/ Kagome and Yusuke haha. Update soon. ^_^

Well, the jealousy was a nice ploy to lead up to a great Sango/Kurama interlude. But, I thought Hiei hadn't had any SERIOUS relationships before, just a few girlfriends over the years, -- and now we find out he keeps going back to Kanna? That's a twist. He sure seemed to be unattached for a while, and this story has been going on for most of the school year, so he hasn't been with Kanna since last year at least, right? And if he finally dropped her because of her jealousy, what is he going to do about Kagome's jealousy? Or does he feel differently about that? Could a declaration of his feelings be coming up? And it was interesting that Kanna was thinking "everybody knows she's still pining for Inuyasha." What's up with that? Can't wait to see!! Loved Sango decking Yura! And how interesting that Kurama has his own little place. Nice. But, what is up with Sango being so naive? Even if she can't tell if he's "releasing" inside her, won't she find out later when it starts running down her legs? LOL!! At least SOMEONE is thinking about protection, because she and Kurama aren't using any, and neither are Kagome and Hiei. (And from the sound of it, Naraku won't be able to find any that fits -- LOL!!) So, I have to wonder if someone is going to turn up pregnant. Our major obstacle once they all realize they're in love and want to stay together, of course, is going to be money. But you've got the solution to that -- Naraku has plenty of his own, and Kagome and Sango can be discovered by an art dealer and make plenty of money to get a place, etc., etc. (Just looking down the road. LOL!!) Loving it all!

LOL! This story is wonderful. I checked out the reviews first to see if it was worth reading since I don't really care for AU. But this is a great story so far. Well, I agree with the one reviewer, I almost feel sorry for Botan, I think they do make protection for someone that large but it's hard to find. But the poor girl will be split in half, she's a virgin, I feel for her LOL! Something that big popping her cherry! Hope he knows how to be gentle and patient. Then again I do disagree with one point. Some guys you can't tell if they cum or not. Sometimes you can feel it sometimes you can't. And the running down the legs doesn't always happen. Never does with my husband, Don't get me wrong it's really wet but the dribbling down the legs isn't always a clue. Besides if she's never had sex before or only once before it'd wouldn't be known. Unless Kags is telling her some juicy tidbits. Ewww, cum down the thigh. Anyways, I can't wait to see how this ends and how you get them all together. Keep up the good work!

It's great, real good. Though I was kind of confused also hearing about Kanna but then not really if you think about it. The first look into Hiei's previous relationships was from his point of view, kind of. Let's be honest it is a male pov. So to him being with Kanna twice probably wasn't a serious relationship even if he was fucking her awhile. So makes you wonder if he sees his relationship with Kagome as serious as well. Then we got Kagome's pov, of course she'd see someone Hiei has been with twice as serious competition and as serious simply because she takes her relationship with Hiei serious. It's all how you look at things I guess but pisses me off cause really makes me think Hiei doesn't see his thing with Kagome as serious. Just like a damn male! And Kurama is worse, I just know he's going to fuck things up. Someone like that is bound to get cold feet when he has to seriously commit. Like I said it's a male thing, most are dogs! Can't wait to see the next chappie!

DAMN GIRL. That had me sweating it was HOT! This is the kind of story where you desperatly wait for the next chapter, but you never want the story to end.

Oh no poor Kagome. I still love what your doing with the Songo and Kurama storyline. Its great. Keep it up.