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by LadyShinomori

person Shiva
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOTHER FUCKERS GOT DA SHIT BEAT OUT OF EM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YUSUKE GOIN GET KAGOME NOW? HIEI LOOKED LIKE HE WAS READY TO FUCK A BITCH UP OVER DAT SHIT.
CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT!
person Laini
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT,an update lol. U know i almost feel sry for Botan *winces* But she could handle Naraku,i think. Makes me wonder if Hiei knows Yusuke likes Kagome...*coughs* Interesting. Sango? A visitor?....Who??? Damn i need to know these things! >.< lol. Love this fic dearly,update soon. ^_^
person Laini
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY HELL..uh yeah I'd say Kurama made his point. I find that odd about Hiei too..i mean he hasnt even told Kagome how he truly feels...i dont blame Kagome for starting to wonder either. I'm sry but other then Hiei and Kagome being the cutest couple ever...Yusuke and Kagome are about up there w/ me, lmao. Loved the update,a pissed off and jealous Kurama is so damn sexy...*dreamy sigh* lol. Update soon. ^_^
person Patty530
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. What can I say that I haven't said in other reviews? I LOVE IT! Please keep it.
person madmiko
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. Now Kagome is a certified MORON and Hiei is a dick. So much for that relationship. You have to be some special kind of stupid to "test out" how your guy is going to feel about you being pregnant by passing it off as a joke. And when he knew they were all coming up with stupid pranks, for him to get so enraged seems really out of whack. Since he knows they were having unprotected sex, for him to get so mad at HER is completely unreasonable. With Kagome's thought about him never acting jealous over her, well, I guess that just blows all MY assumptions about their relationship out of the water, huh? I was afraid it was too good to last. *sigh* So, is this going to be Hiei/Kagome THEN Yusuke/Kagome? Or is Yusuke going to have to fill in the part of the relationship that Hiei is lacking since he's such a jerk? So, Miroku's been hearing rumors, huh? About both Sango and Kurama? He likes to hang out with high school kids? Well, excellent chapter, as always. Not my favorite, of course, heh heh! But excellent, all the same. You sure know how to keep it going!
person Patty530
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honey you did it again. Great chapter. Is Kurama going to confess that he always had feelings for Sango? What about poor Kagome? I love the way you have the relationship between Kurama and Sango going. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person madmiko
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! More great Hiei/Kagome hotness! I really like Botan's aunt. She seems a bit eccentric, but lots of fun. And what an intriguing proposition she gave Botan to visit and possibly housesit. Wonder if the gals will go and take the guys with them? And Kagome still hasn't confirmed her condition? And she's STILL having unprotected sex? Poor, dumb girl. What would it have hurt for Hiei to tell her the girl Yusuke was talking about WAS Sango? Seems like that would be welcome news, and since they're together, it sure wouldn't be hurting anything. Hiei seems quite obsessed with Kagome, but he doesn't say anything about his feelings or about THEM as a couple. Hope his reserve doesn't come back and bite him in the ass if Yusuke decides to make a real move on her. I'll be looking forward to the next exciting installment, as always!
person Ryu
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really need to stop waiting so long to review so it quits telling me I've reviewed too many times in one day. I really wish Kagome had slugged Kanna too. The bitch needs to realize that she's history and there's no way in hell Hiei's ever gonna take her back. I think the fire fly woulda probably enjoyed seeing Kagome kicking her ass too lol good job
person Ryu
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Figures she wouldn't even consider getting pregnant until after it'd happened lol Can't wait to see how Hiei takes this, assuming she tells him any time soon. I imagine that she won't be able to keep the cat in the bag for long though, sooner or later she's gonna start showing unless Hiei keeps this habit up of hiking her skirt up lol good chapter
person Ryu
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Nice Yusuke/Kag action there. I can't imagine how forward he's being but then thats Yusuke for you. I wonder how long it will be before Hiei picks up on the fact that his friend has the hots for her and how much trouble will it cause. I'm surprised she didn't deck him for some of the comments he made lol Good job