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by LadyShinomori

schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please *begs and whimpers* You can't leave it there, so much was left unfinished. I want to know if they come back, how the baby turns out, what Sango's secret was. You've just got to do a two parter. I want to see them as adults, I want to know every juicy little detail. I've been hooked on this story from the first chapter and damnit... I want more!!!
person white kitsune shiva
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story from the beginning. I have kept up with every single up date, keeping you on my "FAVORITES" checking DAILY for any kind of update. I don't really like: Kurama/Sango...(I believe he's Kagomes because they relate on a leave on one else can understand)...Hiei/Kagome...(I think Sango is for him because I think she challenges him, in wits and courage. I believe she can show him the love he needs)...and Im just be real and say not ONCE has the THOUGHT of BOTAN/NARAKU!!!! EVER, EVER, EVER crossed my mind. But its because of authors like YOU who are full of imagination and shit that I love to open, myself to new and different things. I PRAY that you make a sequal for such hard core fans...completely and utterly talking about myself here...or make some new wild and crazy ass story SOON! P.S. U R THE LONGEST REVIEW I HAVE EVER WRITTEN>>>TYPED:D
person Patty530
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honey you did it again! LOVED IT! I've said it before, but I'll repeat myself..I love where it seems you're taking the Kurama and Songo storyline. It's both sexy and romantic. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another update can't wait to read and see what happens next, so I hope you update asap please.
person Laini
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA,figures Hiei would do something so naughty lol. You know it doesnt surprise me that Kagome is pregnant...makes wonder about Sango tho. Im still trying to figure out if Hiei know about Yusukes feelings for Kagome..*cough* but yeah. Loved the chap,update soon. ^_^
person madmiko
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, hot as usual! Nothing like that naughty 'other people in the room' sex. I see that even after his irritation at her little "joke," and his full-blown thought about them having so much unprotected sex that it would have been possible, and therefore not funny, Hiei STILL isn't using anything. Sorry, but if he's being that irresponsible, he has no right to complain. And if Kurama and Sango keep it up, she's going to be joining Kagome soon. LOL!! So, the gals are going to have an all-night gabfest -- those are always fun. I'm sure they will all find out all sorts of things, -- not just Kag's condition. Maybe they'll make plans for the summer. And we can hear if Naraku is ever going to get to collect on that bet. LOL!! Looking forward to it!
person Patty530
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always. I LOVE whats going on with Sango and Kurama. I feel sorry for Kagome. But Damn Sango and Kurama are hot together. (sighs). Keep it Up. :)
person madmiko
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it that Jin finally made an appearance. And he was still spreading the same kind of crap aboput Sango. He really should have known that sooner or later he'd come across whoever DID end up being her first -- great that it was Kurama! Can't believe Kurama didn't let him have it when he kept on with the lies. Hmmm. I am really still amazed at how you managed to redeem Kurama so much that he's now the GOOD boyfriend and Hiei's the jerk. Wonder where he was off to in such a rush? You know, if he thought about it, he really should be able to tell that Kagome DID skip a period -- if they've been having sex as much as you said. Unlike Kurama, he hasn't had to take a week off. So, Kurama knows Yusuke is interested in Kagome, huh? And he saw him with Sango in the park? LOL!! That's what happens when you have sex in public places. 7 weeks until graduation? Good thing for Kagome. Since it's her first pregnancy, and she's in such good shape physically, she probably won't start showing until she's close to four months. Is she starting to think about what the heck she's going to do? She needs to grow up. I would imagine her condition might be a turn off to Yusuke. I'm still holding out hope for Hiei to come through for her -- still waiting for him to step up and admit his feelings. Looking forward to more!
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this. I can't believe that Kagome is pregnant. I liked the way she tried to tell Hiei. He is going to feel like shit when he realizes that it wasn't a joke. But that has me wondering about Sango. They haven't been using anything so they had better watch out. I can't believe Miroku. The nerve of that guy. I liked it when Kurama made his face unrecognizable(spelling). What is it about Sango now? She gets into a serious relationship and decides to have sex and now all these guys think that they can have her. Jin should just forget it. If she didn't want what little bit he probably has then she isn't going to want it now. That is probably why he said all those lies. He knew she wouldn't do anything with him because he was too small. He had to make himself look better. But I loved the way that Kurama and Sango handled it. Of course he would have looked good as road kill also. Ha ha ha! I can't wait to read more.keep up the good work and update soon.
person Laini
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm now things are interesting. *snort* Of course Kurama has feelings for her..how could anyone NOT notice? lol. Loved the chap,cant wait for the next one. Update soon. ^_^