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Whew! Well, I am just emotionally wrung out after reading those five chapters. I have to confess, I'm glad you turned all the guys into dicks at once so I can just hate them all. LOL!! Can't believe Kurama wimped out again like that. And Hiei was just a grade A asshole. And what a shocker about Naraku!! Yikes!! I can't believe you threw that at us like that! You're a genius. So, the girls are going to leave for the summer. Will the guys be like Inuyasha and realize what they lost? I sure hope so!! Of course, Kagome is free game for Yusuke, if he decides to go visit her. Then again, she IS pregnant. I loved the part where Inuyasha took Sango to the prom. He's the only likeable guy in the whole story now. I'll bet he'd kick Hiei's ass if he found out Kagome was pregnant. (I've got to believe Hiei is just foling himself about his feelings, though. He thinks he's so smart, but he's as dumb as the rest of them.) You know what I'd like to see? Before they go, I'd like for Kagome to paint a picture, or even a series of pictures of her with a baby and then maybe showing her with a child growing up. Just the two of them. And while she's gone, have Hiei see them. Has he seen the picture she did of him? It'd make a great exhibit at Karasu's gallery. And she could be "discovered" as a real artist. At least it might cement her future since she's going to have a baby to care for by herself. Did I mention how glad I was that Sango went up to try to save Botan? It's about time SOMEONE told someone else what the heck they knew about their significant other. LOL!! Man, my stomach is just churning with all this angst right now, but I know the best part is still to come, isn't it? You're going to have some great stuff to write when all the guys realize how unbelievably STUPID they've been. I have to wonder, though, how in the world Naraku got away from his wife to attend a prom? And no one else knew he was married? Besides the jerks, I mean. You know, every one of those guys, -- even Yusuke -- deserves to have their world fall apart on them. I sure hope you deliver some justice for all of us fuming fans. LOL!! You know, I'd love to see them all go crawling back to the girls only to discover that Botan's aunt has set them up with some REAL men. LOL!! Since you won't be able to post for a while, I hope you're going to be doing something fun -- you deserve it after the wonderful way you've been entertaining us with this story! But, I'll be waiting anxiously for your return. Thanks so much for sharing your imagination and talent with us!

Again, I'm not one to review anything, but DAMN!!!! No doubt you planned to leave us all hanging like this. Oh the possabilities! Will Sango wrap the teddy up and give to Kurama as a grad present? What part is Inuyasha going to play in all this? Can't help but think there's something more to come from him. And the line about Sango has her own problems as well as Kagome, big ones. What was that appointment for anyways? HHmmmm. I'll say it one more time. You need to accept PayPal so we can all pay you to do this full time.

I LOVE this story. I love your writing style and I am constantly checking to see if it's been updated. I WISH you would write a second part to continue with this story. Your writing is excelent and I hope in the future to be reading more of your work. And I do hope that you write a second part and I'll be on the look-out for one. Congradualations on a well done story.

OMG!!! that was soo good, the ending was very unexpected but i thought ther was goin to be some Kagome/Yusuke going on besides the flirting but it was all that any ways and i hope you write a second part!!!

Oh God that was great! The guys to me are total idiots. But hey what can you say. I feel bad that Kagome couldn't tell Hiei about the baby, but she was probably right about how he would react. All the girls were hurt and they will survive. That is what you call "GIRL POWER". I wish my graduation would have been that eventful. I thought that was great the throwing the cap and gowns down to reveal nighties. And Sango putting how she felt about Kurama in her speech. I thought that was romantic. I bet he feels like a fool. The part where Botan basically f*cked up Naraku car was excellent. And then when Yusuke went back in the bar and basically told them that the girls had just left was so funny. This is a great story and YOU CANNOT END IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi! I love this story. This is an okay ending, but you need to finish it. We're gonna want to know what happens to all of them and how they are as adults. We'll also want to see whether or not they get together once they're more mature. I wanna know how Kagome raises her child. I wanna know about Sango's kid too (i'm assuming that's where you were going with that). I wanna know about the divorce and whether or not the guys can get their heads out of their asses long enough to make things right with their girls. Please, Please make a second story.

Wow...that was kinda sad in the end. Hell yes I would like to see a fic where they are adults. I really enjoyed this fic and hope to see a second part. Good work,I salute you lol. ^_^ *prays for a sequel*

OMG! You have to do more. Please write more. I want to know what those bastards faces look like when they finally find out. I even promise to continue to break my no reviewing habit if you'll right more. I swear you're writing is addictive. I use to make fun of my mother for watching soap operas. (Hangs head) I will no more.

Please don't end it like this. Maybe I'm a hopeless romantic, but lets have at least one happy ending.

That was actually a lot better than I expected. I'd love to see how you make them out as adults. I'm also kinda curious as to whether or not you see them reconciling. Nice work!