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for With Love

by LadyShinomori

person Ellen
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that I have read a few of the other reviews I have to agree with madmiko, I loved her review. I want to see what happens next not yrs on down the road.
I don't think Sango needs to spread herself around though.. but I do think the guys need to fight/prove themselves to get the girls back.. I like happy endings and I'd like to see the guys happy too. Yeah they were jerks but they weren't the only ones making bets and some of it is to blame on poor communication, best thing for a relationship communication ... hehehe I'm rambling now. Thanks again, it is your story do with it what you will! I will read! ^_^
person madmiko
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I got to thinking about my review for the end of the story, and I realized it was as much a "wishlist" as a review. And yes, even though I really, really wanted to see a trite, fairy tale "happy ending," (because they make me feel good), I still enjoyed the way you chose to end it. The girls were positive and upbeat about their futures, and all three of them felt they had done what they could to make their relationships work, so they had no regrets on their end of it. They seemed mature and level-headed, and it was a great plug for their friendship that they knew they could lean on each other. You did good! You should be proud. (Still, in my mind, the guys are already jumping in their cars to go find them, -- of course, Naraku needs to ride with someone else, -- and they will never be able to be with any other females because they know they will only find true love and happiness with the ones they so foolishly let get away. And Hiei gets to be a bundle of nerves in the waiting room when his son is born. LOL!!) Now, about that happy ending for the sequel, ...
person Patty530
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe how emotionally invested I'd become in the story, Especially the Kurama and Sango storyline. Please,Please don't let them end this way. I agree with "madmiko" make the sequal a couple of months not a couple of years. Please. Thanks for a GREAT story.
person MsMina
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well... wow. I don't normally read high school fics. They're just too cheesy a majority of the time. You actually managed to avoid that problem. I enjoyed watching everyone go through the craziness of high school. So it's possible Sango's pregnant too. And I have to wander where the girls will go in adulthood. It would be nice to see them in the future with their kid(s) and careers. As strong as they left, it would be a bit difficult for the guys to get them back. (oh the angst...) I enjoyed this piece and would like to see what you would have the future turn out like for everyone. (Kagome never really got with Yuusake and Hiei hint.) Meeting up again would be interesting for everyone and the discovers would be great. The guys also wouldn't be as emotionally constipated. What ever you decide to do have fun with it. and Thank You.
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you cant just leave it like this i at least wanna see the guyz find out about kagome and sango for that matter this story is to good to end here!!!! plz write a second part!
person xedurpath
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My thoughts on your fanfic xover, above all else are that you did a wonderful job. You put so much feeling into your story. Instead of making it into a happy ending you kind of twisted it around which also opened up the possibility for a sequel. If you do decide to write a sequel than I would be overjoyed to read it and congratulate you on a job well done.
person Emily
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness what a wonderful story! I truly hope you add a second part, I want to know how things end for all the girls! Your story was one of the better inu/yuyu crossovers I've ever read and I am very picky when it comes to them! Congrats on such a wonderful story! I hope to see more in the future!
person Patty530
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Kagome but I have to admit my favorite parts of the story are Kurama and Sango. I like where it looks like they're going. (thats where I hope it goes). Sweet, sexy hot, and romantic. Who could ask for anything more?
person Patty530
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok now my heart is broke. :) Loved the chapter, especially Inuyasha making sure Sango went to the prom.
person Patty530
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Go Sango! Well hell, I hope they both kick ass! Kurama is back to offically being a jackass. My heart is still broken over the way things went with Kurama and Sango. Hope something gets worked out. Update as soon as you can.