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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is good i cant wait for an update and i like were your going keep up the good work
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo... I can't wait for your next update. Very good. I love this story so far. Take care.
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update. I'm really enjoying this story. I hope to see another really soon. Hmmmm... I wonder how she will accomplish that. Finding a way for Kohaku to live will be hard. Maybe Sesshomaru's sword... Well, anyway. I enjoyed it. Thanks and take care.
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And also... I forget to say: Your spacing and grammar has improved a whole bunch. You did a wonderful job on improving. Congratulations.
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is good, but you need to add spacing and work on the grammar a bit. You have great ideas with most all of your stories, but you work is smushed up together, making it difficult to concentrate on and read. Please update this one though.