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for Beloved Little Secreted

by BeautifulOblivion

person cocoke5
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
will i like the story and ihope that you get the story the way you want it. up date soon. i will try to read your other story beuase i think that you are a good writer.
person swtdrm01
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I'm glad I got a chance to read it. I hope you get to update soon.
person DAZ306
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
k just making sure because I dont want this story to end at all. lol

Explain something to me? If they Share will the pup have Sesshoumaru marks or not?
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really a great story. I can't wait to see what is going to happen. I get the feeling that Inuyasha will wake up or something like that and yeah so, please update soon.
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh sweet. how far along is she and how much longer till the birth?
person DAZ306
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man I was looking for a sex part. But other then that it was good. And make sure this is not copy or anything because I would hate it if your story was detele because this is really GOOD!
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. ^.^ Kind of sad that InuYasha is all stuck, but if he were around, it wouldn't be much of a Sess/Kag story, then, lol. ^^ It's a nice twist though. A lot of stories have InuYasha running to Kikyo or dying, so this is a nice change. ^_^ Love it so far, and I can't wait for more!
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh that was sweet and a change in most stories sesshomaru is a boss in a big company. when she wakes up will it finally hit her that sesshomaru kissed her because when they were done she kinda acted like it never happened?
person cocoke5
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes it do clear it up . and i can not wait for the next chapter ofthe story and see what happe next . i hope that she carry the pup . and lose it. up date soon.
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... Nice story so far... It is really good... So what promise did Inuyasha have Sesshomaru make.... Is part of the reason that Sesshomaru won't wake Inuyasha because of his beast going on a rampage and he doesn't think he can handle it,,, did Inuyasha do something bad to Sango and Miroku....Is that what Sesshomaru is keeping from him.... That would hurt Kagome really bad... Ok and whats up with Kikyo and why did she do that... Why was she by the well in the first place.. I like how you made Sesshomaru a P.I.. That is a nice touch... Different then the usual business tycoon.. I like it.. Different but good....
Well anyways nice story and can't wait for next chapter so please hurry and update...
Take Care
Mari