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for Beloved Little Secreted

by BeautifulOblivion

schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, this is very nice so far, I think it would be awesome if they turned out to be a threesome of some sort. I do not think it would be right to distance Kagome and Inuyasha. I think that their bond with each other would be FAR stronger and Kagomes' loyalty towards Inuyasha would far outweigh anything that she felt for Sesshomaru.
person Lord Of The Flames
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UDPATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
person DAZ306
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um ok. BUT PLEASEEEE A 3 SOME that would but.like Paris Hilton say's "That's Hot!"

lol
person Lord Of The Flames
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter.Keep up the good work.
person DAZ306
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why didnt she leave Inuyasha alone. It's a sesshoumaru and Kagome story. Not a 3 some..........ooo lol naw
person madmiko
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Thanks for the heads-up about this story! I just finished the first chapter and it looks awesome! I love the suspense and angst right at the beginning. How eveil of Kikyou to separate them like that. I'm glad Inuyasha just ripped her up. Ha! Was Sesshoumaru going to kill Kagome? I take it most of this will take place in the modern era, and that Sess is waiting there for her on the other side of the well. I hope Inu is, too! I know, I know this is in the Sess/Kag section, but even that one little chapter set up such a beautiful Inu/Kag relationship that I have to hope for a cozy little family to emerge.
person madmiko
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read the second chapter, and it's just great! But, oh no! Poor Inuyasha! Sealed to another tree? And doesn't want to be awakened this time because of things he did in his youkai form? But, ... but, ... that's so sad!! I like the way Sess is reacting to Kagome in the present time. And it's nice that Inu asked him to take care of her and their child. But, ... waaaahhhhh!!! I'll be reading the other chapters soon, and I'll review as I go. This is really, really nicely written.
person DAZ306
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
judgment my ass!!lol
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweetie, where have you been hiding? You work is very good. I'm really beginning to get the 'feel' for this story. Actually, it's pretty damned good. I'm looking forward to reading all of it. Please let everything come out okay for Inuyasha's little puppy. Up-date soon, sweetie.
person Lord Of The Flames
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.