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for Beloved Little Secreted

by BeautifulOblivion

person Lord Of The Flames
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Update soon.
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I'm suprised I missed this one until now. I'm loving what I have read so far. Keep up the good work, and I will be looking forward to reading more.
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and the way it is going you keep me glued to my seat. Ty for writing this story
person cocoke5
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you i love the story real good and can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen next. up date soon.
person DAZ306
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know if you waws going to watch it for real. Wow lmao

But your welcome on the comments and what not. Gald your ok.
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the awesome story. Cant' wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it could you email me when you update the story plz
person cocoke5
schedule May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more the story is real good and i love it and threes will be nice. good luck. up date soon.
person DAZ306
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
have a safe trip. Dont watch Snakes on a Plane before you go. Nightmares. 3 some? FOREAL? YAY lol

I'm bad. Bad Jacke'e Bad
person alatera
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have to say this is a good story. Inuyasha really doesn't seemed disturbed because of his past( maybe because of all the male posturing they are doing regarding Kagome?). Sesshomaru's prediction of his not wanting to be woke up seems off now. While a threesome can be "hot" I can't really see it happening until way later if at all( there's always a seperate one-shot you could write).They are too possessive in my book to share her together completely. The only thing I can see at the moment is competing between them to please her more. Her in the middle being pulled from side to side while they try to top each other.But being she's pregnant none of this type stuff is really good for her( mentally or physically). She loves both of them but she would have had to put Inuyasha behind her somewhat to accept Sesshomaru. Will Inuyasha's past catch up to him or has it been forgotten? Is this going to remain a Sess/Kag or turn into a Sess/Kag/Inu? I hope it stays Sess/Kag though. Have fun . Till the next chapter