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for Beloved Little Secreted

by BeautifulOblivion

person Suniko
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like always it was good! I know you've been busy. I can't wait when you post your next chapter. Those dogs demons just have to intervin huh. LOL So what is happen to the kids at the park? I talk to you later! Take care! I can't wait when you write the birth of baby. I can see the boys pasting around and there ears hurt and Kagome keeps bitting their heads off. Like I said I can't wait when you post the next chapter!

Suniko
person cocoke5
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you and i love the story and was happy to see a up date and have to read it. and love the way that inuyasha talk to shippo son. tell him what his life was like. and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story and will kagoem met shippo son. up date soon and keep the story going your fan.
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I love being in suspense! I'm also glad I could help. I love the idea of Kagome being mated to both of them, but we both know that that kind of relationship doesn't last forever! lol...being the rarity that it truly is. Someone has to get kicked to the curb...and I'm rootin' for a certain sexy full-blooded demon...if you get what I mean...just a little hint...I do think later on after the child's birth a threesome is in order...it would fit in perfectly. I love the whole getting along for the sake of Kag's health as well, but they are brothers...and as a sister with both an older and a younger sibling...guys can only share thier "toys" for so long...Keep up the great work!
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your awsome can't wait for the next chapter
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story and I look forward to future chapters.
person Suniko
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. So what happen to Shippo's son? I know you will update soon. I can't wait to read it. Email me letting me know that you have update. So I could read it soon as it is update. You are a good writer! ~Suniko~
person Lord Of The Flames
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. And thanks for the cliffy.
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm surprised...I have no idea where things are going from this point. I do wish you had elaborated more on the point of Kagome and Shippo...or maybe one of them could reflect on the conversation that went on that the reader's didn't get to see...Just an idea; keep up the great work!
person DAZ306
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are getting reallllllllllly good. I 'm loving this story.
person cocoke5
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the new chapter and i love it and can not wait for the next one and how did inyuasha and sesshumaru found shippo son. i can not wait for it up date soon. your fan.