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for Beloved Little Secreted

by BeautifulOblivion

person Suniko
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! So who was that man?! what is he going to do with Mon? oh please please update soon! I know you are very besy woman. But jez girl! you left it as a supenful scene! I hate TBC right where it would have me clinging to my set to want to know more. LOL

You take care. I know you will update soon as you can. Take care. Don't over work yourself!

Suniko
person Lord Of The Flames
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grinnig. I can't wait for you to update or send me the file. Hehehe. I love having the power of love.
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey hunny nice job on the story. having a pup of my own, email address is ice_mistress_06@yahoo.com and lets chat sometime.
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great first chapter. You have this_mrs_sesshoumaru begging for more and I do not beg since I do have some dignity.....MORE MORE MORE. lol
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, take all the time you need! I understand that most of us have a life outside of writing fanfiction...lol! This chapter was very good. I wonder how the three get along so well when Inu ans Sess know that it can't be like this long term... I wonder what's happening to Kagome at this point...maybe the combined mating marks are harming her...fighting each other for complete dominance from her a s a mate...hmmm...
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you are writing Sesshy out so well! He's so ic. This is such a bittersweet story, I can't wait to have time to read the rest!<3
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I loved this chapter, but i am extremely curious about what is going to happen between the three now that the pup is in the world. Kagome, whether she lik3es it or not, is going to have to choose one or the other, she can't have both. I'll make this easy on you...I'll take Sesshoumaru off your hands (aka, he's mine) and Kagome can have inu. I think I'm being gracious...no tough decisions or anything, what do you say...lol! keep up the great work!
person Suniko
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Yeah! Like always it was great!

But I do have to get on to you! You sould have email me letting me know it was up. Thank goodness I came on. Next time I talk to you I will get on to you. LOL JK. I know you are very busy woman. I guess I will cut some slack.

So whats her name? I can't wait for the next update. I will talk to you later. Take care hon.

Your friend,
Suniko
person Crysan
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooo please update soon i love your story!
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was waiting for the next chapter of this story. I've never seen anything like it! I kind of guessed what was coming with the title and everything. There is soooo much suspense mounting up (no pun intended) that I really have to wonder who Kagome is going to wind up with in the very end...I'm rooting for good ol' Sesshoumaru, but I think the story will be great either way in the end! Good luck with the next chapter!