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for Beloved Little Secreted

by BeautifulOblivion

person sugar0o
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awe that was sad and yet wonderful i think it went well, i like that Sess and Mon were watching cartoons together. ha! still kinda wish she got preggy. :X but then i think its because i like reading lemons, o well. lovely story. - r0o
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I hope you get this. I've been trying to email you. I've started to read this story again. Write in a reveiw of one of my stories. love Alyson
person sugar0o
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We have a new puppy now, a mutt, he looks like a Jack Russell/German Shepard/Doberman Pincher mix, he's only 24 lbs givertake, he's crazy. but i adore the little man, your dogs sound cute.

now for the story, i really do adore this story, you've always got me wondering just what will happen next. I'm wondering what Haku will do when/if he gets Kags, I also wonder just what Kags is going to do when she gets pissed enough to go into "overprotective mama" stage. *winkage* still can't wait to see what happens when/if sess get preggy ^_^
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! You really need to add a steamy threesome scene to it! The entire story is just begging for it! What could be hotter than Kagome getting both brothers at once? Anyway, I hope you update soon! :)
person sugar0o
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol pissy IY's are fantastic. I must admit that i'm not an IY/Kags fan anymore, but this story has me trapped in the best way, i wonder sometimes though will she truly end up with both, or just Sess. I mean he is Alpha, as far as i know he has the right to deny IY to have Kags, and then sometimes i just think its hard to see them both sharing her. I say this b/c i have 2 mini schnauzers. They can't share anything unless its bed time, and only then b/c the beds so big. they fight over everything. My oldest lets the little one run a muck too, unless he's pissed then the big boy about snaps little mans head off. so i dunno. though i do know i love this story. I'm concerned for Mon's character though, i mean she's 1/4 demon and still as powerful as her dad... 0o0o0o make her preggy with Sess' its his turn!!! *wink*
person sugar0o
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_o is she preggy again?
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good story!! please continue soon!
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YaY! Loved the chapter! Congrats on your classes and their high scores! I'm studying to become an English techer on the college level...and I still have like at least 4 years to go! lol I'm going on to the next chapter now! :)
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I've caught up on the chapters. I think that whoever you are going to get rid of...whether it be Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru...they'll die against this enemy...protecting Kagome and Mon...the way it seems is it will be Inuyasha that dies...who knows, the next chapter might have an officer at the door or something telling them of Inuyasha's death...hmmmm...that's all I got right now...lolXD maybe more later...XD
person Suniko
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im so glad that you updated. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Mon be ok? Oh Please update! I know you very busy. Just don't over work yourself. Take care and Merry Christmas!

Suniko