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by razvanwink

schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still lovin' it!

Please, please continue.

I want to know what Sesshoumaru is thinking.
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now THIS is interesting! Quite a change from the usual S/K routine... and nicely written, too. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely lovin' it.

Please update soon!
person cocoke5
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i like your think about up date one chapter a time is good and i have to tell you that the story is real good and i like very much and i can not wait for thenext chapter ofthe story . good luck and up date soon.
person Sinful
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Avid reader at ur service......thanks for another great chapter
person szaugg
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, as usual, a very enjoyable chapter. Sesshoumaru is hot...could he BE anything else? I fully enjoyed Kagome's inner dialogue, and Sesshoumaru's reactions to the bare limbs AND the rejection. Inuyasha is still a bit of a mystery: does he want her because of sour grapes, because of 'wow, I actually do want her', or because Sesshoumaru wants her? I don't know, but I love the explanation for why he kissed her!

Looking forward to more
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool, another great chapter! thanks for the prompt update
person szaugglaughs
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your characterization of Sesshoumaru is what just makes me do the little fangirl cha-cha. He's just...such a lovely, sexy, cold-hearted, deadly, arrogant ass and I LOVE him. Heh.

And Inuyasha...loved the scene.

And now I'm curious if Inuyasha saw anything, or if he just smelled sessh and reacted...but I really wanna know why he reacted THAT way rather than with yelling. I'm sure we'll find out!

person ayame
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You're doing a good job keeping them in character. I love it how the Dog fights with himself. lol Update soon.
person DAZ306
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL.......THAT WAS NICE