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by razvanwink

person insane dragoness
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thats The Best Sess/kag Ive Ever Read! Let Me Know When U Tpdate! Damn I Gotta Get Some Sleep 2am And I Gotta Be @ Work By Ten. Up All Nite Reading This On A Cell Phone Browser. I Couldnt Put It Down! Write More Soon!
person Wolf-in-sheep-clothing
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luv it!!!!
person DAZ306
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so shes a Miko......Nice.
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another brilliant chapter! reading your latest is the first thing I do when I get home from work (after the doggies, of course)
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah for Rin!! I like the way you show her, especially now that she's a child in a woman's body (poor dear). Also pleased that Sessh got some memory back, even if for a short time.
person Elisabeth
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru doesn't wear a pelt, darling.^_^ That's his tail, thrown over his shoulder.
I adore this, by the way. It's terribly sexy, and the plot isn't completely improbable. Especially the way he picked up the vial. It's all stuff that could actually happen. None of the characters are OUT of character.
On to the smut!
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the author is correct. That furry thing is a pelt. Rumiko said she had drawn it too big, but liked it, and kept it. Besides, he has taken it off several times. Tails don't come off.

Sorry, about that. I had to address the reviewer above me. Anyway, great story. I like how you a have a sess/kag without the major bashing and oocness that usually comes with them. Waiting for your next update.

P.S. How many chapters do you have completed now? Have you started chapter 16, yet?
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was totally off base. I was expecting a demon transformation as well. Angst for everyone :)
person cocoke5
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh so he made her grow up . oh i feel for rin. now kagoem have to keep inuyasha and sesshurmaru from kill each other. up date soon.
person Sinful
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW another great chappie.......I hope nothing terrible will happen to Rin tho