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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the chapter. Love sessh, as usual.
I'm havin a little trouble with Rin and how she's acting, but I can't pinpoint it. I can see her being completely traunatized by the growing and the angst and upset over Sesshoumaru and the fact that she's still just a child, so I can see that causing her to be tricked. I guess maybe where I have the small problem is that her being tricked just doesn't quite mesh with her earlier confidence, and I don't see quite as much confusion evident in her portrayal, and I guess even though she's a child, I never see her as being that gullible. Having been beaten and treated like dirt for her childhood, seeing blood and violence with sessh.
Although I guess deceit might still be new to her,hmmm
Could just be me, of course, and I still like the writing and the plot and everything else!
I'm havin a little trouble with Rin and how she's acting, but I can't pinpoint it. I can see her being completely traunatized by the growing and the angst and upset over Sesshoumaru and the fact that she's still just a child, so I can see that causing her to be tricked. I guess maybe where I have the small problem is that her being tricked just doesn't quite mesh with her earlier confidence, and I don't see quite as much confusion evident in her portrayal, and I guess even though she's a child, I never see her as being that gullible. Having been beaten and treated like dirt for her childhood, seeing blood and violence with sessh.
Although I guess deceit might still be new to her,hmmm
Could just be me, of course, and I still like the writing and the plot and everything else!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Two whole chapters to read while laying here sick. Wow... They finally did it, and she admitted to being his. Hmmm... Can't wait to see what happens with Rin and Inu Yasha.
Take care.
Take care.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww how cute lol. That was hot and freaky in so many ways. I love Sess and Kag.. a wonderful pairing. Your doing great. Please update soon.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is the greastest sesshoumaru/kagome fic EVER ~thank you!! thank you for updating reguarly and not leaving us hanging. my face is still red, lol!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fucking sweet! can't wait for the update... i've gotta find out what is going to happen with rin! well, that and i wanna read more hot smut featuring sesshomaru!!! yummy... ;}
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O00OOO00 Sesshomaru is back......and I'm loving it. Keep up the good work
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Considering how long he had to be out of character (due to the effects of the spell) it's good to see him back and insisting on being in charge again. Sad to think of their lovemaking being at Rin's expense, however. Great story and I love how you've taken such a crazy notion (the potion) and made it into an intricate plot feature rather than just a device.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I just read like 3 chapters back to back and I love it. I cant say anything else other then WOW!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, and great chapter! I would love to read more soon. ^.^ Crazy Kagome. o.O lol Anyway, update soon!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, sessh ate dirt....this is gonna be soooooooo fun. And i'm on tenterhooks desperately hoping RIn doesn't make the wrong choice! eeek! Nicely written. Good sex scene, woo hoo.