rate_review Reviews

So great a story! I am really looking forward to the next chapter! I also wish you all the best for your story/book that brought you to write this one.

great story but what happened to shippo????

I swear to you, after reading your other fanfic I was wondering if you had some story of your own, with original characters, and I thought how I'd love to read it... And now you say you're writing a novel! You have no idea how happy I am for you. Please don't give up on it. Perhaps one day you could show us a chapter, or even a brief introduction?

About this chapter... I feel sorry for Rin. She didn't deserve such an awful thing. :(
The plot is getting complicated. What will happen if Kagome discovers that Raiju was the one who ordered the witch to give her the potion, and that it's effect hasn't wore off?

Guess I'll just wait for the next chapter to find out. Take all the time you need to edit and write those last chapters. I'm sure it'll turn out a great finale! *.*

Sadness!! Both Rin and Kagome unhappy in the future? She looks back on this moment with bitterness while Rin is being taken by the icky dude? Where is the justice? Oh, it's coming up, huh? Right. I'll just sit back patiently then, shall I? Oh, and a potential sequel? Yes, please, with sugar on top!

My heart is breaking for your poor Rin! Good work, as usual. Nice build up for Inu Yasha, too.

Man no!!! Ugh Sesshoumaru better hurry is ass up shit!!

Greetings!

I just wanted to congratulate you for your great work. I can see you thought about every detail for this story, including to keep the characters' personalities unchanged. I just think Sesshoumaru should be a little more concerned about Rin, but I'll wait to see how this develops, hehe.

You have good writing skills. And you know when to change from the thoughts of one character to another, leaving the reader in expectation, wanting to know what's going to happen next. This is without doubt one of the best fanfics I've read so far. I'll be sure to drop in everyday to read the next chapter.

Seriously, I'm trying my best not to write silly things in this review, like: "oh my god, i love this fic, please post more!!11" or "i wanna see lemon between Rin and Inuyasha!" or even... ok, nevermind.

Thank you for sharing this with everyone! I'll keep an eye on your other works. :)

good chapter!!

Getting to the fun part! Update soon.

Bitch! That's it. Your so mean. Update bitch. I love your story. It's soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.