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by razvanwink

schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa this looks really good and i cant wait to read more so move your ass and start writing already lol ^_^
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fiction so far, i like how the reader never knows what Sesshomaru will do next; will he accept Kagome or reject her? great job, this is a super piece of writing!
person Sinful
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did i happen to say ur story was interesting....I'm sry but it isnt....its great actually, you have the characters put together nicely, and ur story line isnt as predictable as other writters. I love it
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it!

Please keep going!
person DAZ306
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is reallllllllllllly good
person swtdrm01
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, please update soon. What is Sesshoumaru going to do? What is Inuyasha going to see? Please, oh pwetty pwease update soon.
person szaugg
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I just love this. The flow, the dialogue, and I am enjoying Sesshoumaru's reaction immensely. The details are just enough to give the impression of surrounding, expression, etc... and not so much that they drag at the reader. I will be avidly watching for more!
person DAZ306
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn. That was...Rin lol Inuyasha lmao wow
person amber
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a great story....do you have any other kag/sesh stories?
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You updated fast. I loved this. I can't wait to see another update. I gotta know what is going to happen with Inu Yasha.

Take care.