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for The Second Time Around

by kimisan

person Anon
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I always enjoy throwing ideas around with you and seeing how far the muses can be pushed. This is looking to be another great fic, can't wait to see the rest of the characters introduced. I know that whatever evil it is your muse has planned is bound to be good. Keep up the good work.
person lynn
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always, I love your stories. You always have a good plot and always have great lemons. Don't ever let anyone get to you about updating. I know that you have a life and respect that as well. personally I think you do great for someone who works like you do. Can't wait for more chapters. I know they are going to be just as good. * Bows down* I am your humble servant. Do as you well my queen.
person madmiko
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Hot, hot, hot! You've already hooked me with that chapter, and I'm not even a particular Kurama/Keiko fan. That was awesome -- well-written, steamy, and completely intriguing. Already we have two characters coerced into a realtionship that wouldn't have otherwise happened, which will certainly have far-reaching results affecting many other people. I am already extremely curious about the mysterious cloaked figure and exactly what his/her plans are beyond Keiko becoming pregnant. We already know that Yusuke is gone too much of the time. Your pairings have me all aflutter. I am first and foremost a Kag/Hiei fan, so of course I love that, but the others -- so original and fascinating. I am wondering how they will all come together -- in situations like this one, manipulated by a scheme? Or will there be more going on? Obviously there will be, if King Enma is up to something. I just can't wait to see what you have in mind for this!!! I hope you are so excited by this idea that you write more soon!!