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The basic story line is good but your spelling and punctuation leave much to be desired. It got kinda hard to read in some spots because of it. Sorry but I just call 'em as I see 'em.

I love it so keep it up

kags 21 i love your storys and i love this one and can not wait for the next chapter of the story. up date soon.

Now THAT was a funny chapter! I loved it when Rin's dad made her say that her "sisters" are whores -- LOL!! And I really liked Sess calling Kikyou on trying to look like Kag -- nice one! (It gets tiring to keep hearing that Kag looks like her.) Hmmm. Technically, since Sess and Sango had a one-night thing, I don't think they would consider each other lovers. Surely she wouldn't have considered herself his bitch for one pop. And you know, everyone BUT Rin in this story has had WAY too many sex partners. They should all have AIDS. Or the clap. Or genital herpes. LOL!! That was too funny how Sess let it slip to Inu that he had had sex with Kag! And it took Inu a minute to pick up on it -- hilarious!! Thanks for the fun!

yeah new chappy. sango got around lucky her ha ha

Yay! Thanks so much for the email about the new chapter! Whoa! I would think it would be REALLY awkward having your brother AND the man you are sleeping with and trying to get pregnant by BOTH tell you they had slept with your best friend. And there are no jealousies anywhere? Weird! How could Naraku possible have known? Weren't she and the Sess the only ones who knew? And Sess is being a bit unreasonable about his sister considering what he is doing with Naraku's sister, isn't he? Yeah, she's a few years older, but ... Heh heh! So, is Sess hoping that if Kag is with him and ONLY him for the duration of the pregnancy, that she will fall in love with him? Is he in love with her? Their friendship is really very nice. I am looking forward to seeing their relationship progress to more!

two words, update soon.

Wow O_O. rough or gentle and still owed dinner. lovely

Just started this one -- very interesting. I like the way Kag and Sess are such good friends, -- even if he is a man-whore. I like Naraku being her brother, too. Interesting list of former lovers Kag has. And now she's asking her friend to ... father her child? I'll look forward to seeing where you go with this.

wow i love it plaese update soon i so want to read more.