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acabo de encontrar esta historia y me agrado la relasion que tienen asta el momento kagome y sesshomaru y su futuro bebe espero con mucho entusiasmo el proximo capitulo

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

I love your fiction. I had a lot of humor. When I read it I didn't have the charaters from the show in my mind. Keep up the good work!!!!

Blackrose

Ok I like this story, I do, BUT I gotta say this about chapter 18...WTF? I mean, come the fuck on. Naraku jumps to Kagome's defense on everything else but he lets this little girl who JUST entered their lives call his little sister a whore? I don't fucking think so. He should have no made her apologize he should've slapped her. That would have punished Kira AND shown Kagome that he still loves her. I mean come on, she should be more important to him then this new little girl. and the whole sending the bear thing but not visiting? Yeah, even to us non pregnant girls that tells us he's favoring the new kids. You fucked up your own story I mean...COME ON. Why would Naraku let Kira get away with it?! He wouldn't by the way you've had him in the story! anyway just wanted to get that off my chest...But this story IS good, I am enjoying it, just that one scene bugged me.

I love the story!! It has a really good plot, and I love the fact that Kag and Sess start out as friends that flirted with each other. I hope you will be adding a new chapter soon.

I love this so much and I hope you update very soon... I'm looking forward to the update.

oh yeah the story is getting real good and i can not wait for more and i hope that kagome and sesshumaru get their baby . up date son. loving fan.up date soon.

very good chapter and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story .and up date soon. good luck

I like it perfect for reading at 1:15 in the morning. Then again any thing with Sessy is fine by me.

Nice but I normally hate naraku for obvious reasons but in this story he is quite likable keep it up and when will naraku settle down jeesh. hehe also readers request could you make you lemons longer and more detailed explain just how the kiss affects kagome how sesshy skin feels against hers, emotions the full out feeling of her and his orgasms the whole bit lemons really should be long thought out things never a paragrapgh or two so twas a tad annoyed but your plot and storyline made up for it it's quite funny well update soon hope you take my advice.

Arry