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very good and can not wait for more of the story and see what happpen next and see if kagome leave and work for sesshumaru.up date soon.

It's looking good ^^
Get a beta for the few spelling mistakes and you got yourself a good fic :D

Sounds like a great beginning. Update soon please.

Wow! Your English is simply marvolous. And, this is coming from an English teacher. I do catch several errors while reading, and they range from being distractive and hindering to the story to adding to the feel that the author is trying to create by using slang. I did see an instance every so often that another word would have served you better, but your point was still clear.

Keep up the practicing; you're doing a wonderful job.

Also, this is a very interesting story so far. An excellent start. I hope to see more of it soon.

(If you do check out my stories, I know. I need to go through and fix my mistakes. I have to get my work get very cold before I can edit it or else I will not catch any of my slip ups.)

That was great and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting for far too long and keep up the great work.