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December 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this cute story.
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October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was one hot story so far and I was wondering if you were going to take this story any further or not if not could you let us know so we don't keep hoping for more updates because that is so disappointing when you see none. You did the lemons quite amazingly if not the characters who were quite a bit ooc but that's okay it was a fantastic couple of sex scenes.
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!Talk about mind blowing.O_O That was awesome,hope to see more soon!!!^____^
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*mouth hangs open* *notices the pool of drool on the floor and snaps out of it* OM- FREAKIN -G!!! That has to be one of the HOTTEST stories i've read... EVER!! Plot? what plot? who needs that?! I'm still reeling over how amazing that was, if this was FF.net i'd most def be adding this to my story alerts. *fans self* thanks for that friend
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh! The edited version is much much better! I like this! Hope you write more soon!
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O!M!F!G!!!!!!!!! My heart stopped. I swear, i'm dead. I've died from the extreme hardcore yaoi. I'm in heaven. *fans self* I love you!
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the reviews and I'll try to fix it up a bit. The third chapter will explain a few things about it but it's not finished yet. Hope u like the fixed Den of Pleasure.See ya around.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hawt hawt hawt! Hope there's another soon to come!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For a PWP, this isn't too bad. However, there are some things you need to watch out for. A - spell check. It's spelled orgasm, not orgasim. B - there's a lot more prep work in anal than what you're giving here. As it is, Inuyasha would've been in constant pain, not pleasure with Sesshoumaru just 'slamming' in. May I suggest finding a beta?
Not too bad...spicy for sure. Just slow down and don't be in such a rush to publish. We'll wait for updates. :)
Not too bad...spicy for sure. Just slow down and don't be in such a rush to publish. We'll wait for updates. :)
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you really shouldn't put the abriviations for things in here. like you you put u, that's really not allowed. i should really htink that you should change that. but you do have a good story. i think you should put more foreplay into it, without that its just really corny.