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for You have Returned to me

by chicke222

person cocoke5
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is good and can not wait for the next chapter ofthe story. and kagome grandfather gave her that sword and now she will be help and what will sess think when he see the sword. up date soon.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOO! I like it so far! can't wait to see if kagome gets the memories!
person Celtic_Angel24
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm is the sword the same one that Sesshoumuaru's mate had? And if so how will Sesshoumaru react to seeing her with it?
person swasdiva
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Methinks Midoriko's soul was not entirely trapped in the jewel, eh? Considering Kagome's powers and all, and her previous incarnation...just guessing! Regardless, another good chappie! Can't wait for more!
person swtdrm01
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and I can't wait to find out how he will react to the sword and then to her soul. Great job.
person swtdrm01
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can think of is WOW! But then again, I loved all your stories. Please update soon.
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story
person cocoke5
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more the story is good and ilike to see who sess found in love again. up date soon. please.
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries* That was so sad... please update. pretty please.
person swasdiva
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freaking great, although I had half expected the miko to be Midoriko, but then, that's been done before, eh? Nice dichotomy between his situation and the hypocritical mistake that killed Inu no Taisho. There's already a solid depth to this story, a marvelously angsty undercurrent ripe with the potential of a fulfilling emotional romance. Amazing start, can't wait to read more!

My only beef would be a few grammatical errors that make some paragraphs hard to read, but again, your style and plot are excellent.