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for In The Heat Of The Moment

by Chococat

person deathdreamerofneverlove
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha that was funny good job!
person heather
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please update soon ( i really want to see what happens next )
person Temari20
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... wow... That...Was........

Suprising...
person Kaggs
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was really good you should keep writing it!! please do! please!!
person WTW
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was quite interesting! I liked how it went slowly in the beginning but then the story kind of rushed. You did well with the details. It would be nice to see how Inuyasha gets out of this mess with Kagome. Seems you hinted at the thought that Inuyasha had relations with Kikyo. Eep! ^^ Keep it up.
person Little Jack 2
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great I can't wait to read chapter 2,I really enjoyed having Kagome pissed off to the extreme for being called Kikyo.
person Patricia_may
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh now I get it! Poor Inu! It was fun while it lasted. ne? ^_^
person sassy one
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
way too good. fkn brilliant actually! to be honest, this is the FIRST story since like a year to get me hooked. I'm a picky bitch. but this was well written, beautifully described, excellent timing and excellent length, plus the catch at the end - brilliant you are. you should try to update soon AND write more stories! i'll be waiting!