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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you have to keep writing! I need to know what happens next!
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I really really like this story, Im a little disappointed in Inuyasha so far tho but Im sure your going to explain it all out. I was just wondering however, when the next chapter was going to be out? Ive came back to this story several different times over the weeks and havent yet seen a new chapter. If you can will you please E-mail and give me an estimate time for how long till the next chapter? I really would like that cause im going crazy waiting! Lol keep up the good work bu bye!
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I thought it would show you my email after I posted but when I was looking through them it didnt so Im now giving you my email lol Shardetector@aol.com
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and that was the last ANYBODY SAW OF INUYASHA'S HANYOU ASS!
Kagome was a wise woman and hid the remains where no one would ever, ever, ever find them. Not even Sesshoumaru, tho he searched hard for his brother, excuse me, half-brother, intending to end his life just for the sheer pleasure of it. How disappointed he was, but he was very suspicious of the little miko and that righteous smirk perched on her face for weeks after Inuyasha's disappearance. Yes, he was VERY suspicious of the little miko. But one day she disappeared into the old bone eater's well and was never heard from again in the Feudal Era. Back in her own time she finished school with honors, got her masters in business, found the remaining shikon shards, completed and purified the jewel, then built a vast commercial empire that made Donald Trump's look like kindergarten and left Bill Gates whining with jealousy.
And as for Naraku? Well, Kanna, Kagura and Kohaku, his most loyal slaves, arose one morning [and every sensible being knows that mornings, being what they are, should be approached with the greatest of care and sufficient quantities of caffeine] to find that Naraku, being a morning person, had forgotten to get more coffee. They were completely out. In a fit of pique the three turned on their erstwhile master and tore him to such tiny shreds that even the shikon shards couldn't put his hinky, kinky, tetacled ass together again. Kagura found her missing heart in the liquor cabinet soaking in a bottle of Chambord that she was emptying by way of celebration. Free at last and heart, quite literally in hand, she took off for Las Vegas with a 1/3 of the shikon shards, becoming a showgirl at the Mirage. Kanna and Kohaku married, sold their 2/3 of the shards and opened a nice little party store in Detroit on 8 Mile Road, wanting to live a more peaceful, quiet life after all the years they'd spent with his weirdness, Naraku. All in all, everyone else lived happily ever after, including all of the fans who are sick of Naraku and just want his hinky, kinky ass dead!
well, that's the only way i could see this fic ending after he said the magic name. it's really good and if you add more to it i will read it because your writing is good, but in my heart i know she killed him.
Kagome was a wise woman and hid the remains where no one would ever, ever, ever find them. Not even Sesshoumaru, tho he searched hard for his brother, excuse me, half-brother, intending to end his life just for the sheer pleasure of it. How disappointed he was, but he was very suspicious of the little miko and that righteous smirk perched on her face for weeks after Inuyasha's disappearance. Yes, he was VERY suspicious of the little miko. But one day she disappeared into the old bone eater's well and was never heard from again in the Feudal Era. Back in her own time she finished school with honors, got her masters in business, found the remaining shikon shards, completed and purified the jewel, then built a vast commercial empire that made Donald Trump's look like kindergarten and left Bill Gates whining with jealousy.
And as for Naraku? Well, Kanna, Kagura and Kohaku, his most loyal slaves, arose one morning [and every sensible being knows that mornings, being what they are, should be approached with the greatest of care and sufficient quantities of caffeine] to find that Naraku, being a morning person, had forgotten to get more coffee. They were completely out. In a fit of pique the three turned on their erstwhile master and tore him to such tiny shreds that even the shikon shards couldn't put his hinky, kinky, tetacled ass together again. Kagura found her missing heart in the liquor cabinet soaking in a bottle of Chambord that she was emptying by way of celebration. Free at last and heart, quite literally in hand, she took off for Las Vegas with a 1/3 of the shikon shards, becoming a showgirl at the Mirage. Kanna and Kohaku married, sold their 2/3 of the shards and opened a nice little party store in Detroit on 8 Mile Road, wanting to live a more peaceful, quiet life after all the years they'd spent with his weirdness, Naraku. All in all, everyone else lived happily ever after, including all of the fans who are sick of Naraku and just want his hinky, kinky ass dead!
well, that's the only way i could see this fic ending after he said the magic name. it's really good and if you add more to it i will read it because your writing is good, but in my heart i know she killed him.
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh shit. thats fucked up...very very VEERRRRRY fucked up
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!! I would have cut his thing off right there and then!!! Inuyasha no baka!!!!! OSUWARI, OSUWARI, OSUWARI!!! Baka, baka, baka, baka!!! You never, ever, ever, do that to a girl unless you have a fucking death wish!! Ok, that's it from me!!
Ja ne!!
Ja ne!!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey what the hell Inyasha would never sleep with Kikyo and if he did and then slept with Kagome he would no it was Kagome not Kikyo. Why would any one want to sleep with Kikyo anyway?. You know i'm a guy and I would never do somthing like that I mean why do us men always have to cheat and lie and shit I mean some guys don't do that kind of shit like Inuyasha wouldn't and neather would I. Plus some girls do the same thing and no one ever thinks a girl will do shit when she could.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did fine with this Lemon. It was great.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that BASTARRD
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay. Going for the shock value -- I get it. And the writing was fine. It WAS shaping up to be a nice lemon. BUT, come on! Are we seriously supposed to believe he got caught up "in the heat of the moment" after masturbating to thoughts of Kagome, after saying her name several times and asking her if she was a virgin, after taking her virginity and experiencing the warmth and wetness of her body and her orgasms, and he suddenly right at the end mistakes her for a dry, cold corpse he's been fucking? Get real. Kikyo: dead, cold, no bodily fluids for lubrication, and he's been sticking his dick in that and can't tell the difference when he's with/inside a real, live, warm body? I'm glad this was a one-shot, because there's no redeeming him, unless you want to attach an epilogue of Kagome purifying him to dust. Really, there's no other way to go with this. Your writing skills are excellent, and I'd like to see more of your work, but this just left me with my gut clenching. (Which is a testament to your writing skills.) This isn't a flame, -- I was just disappointed by the turn of events since I browse the Inu/Kag category for reasons to celebrate and like the canon couple. (Stories like this keep me firmly in the Hiei/Kag crossover camp. LOL!) I'll be looking up your other stuff.