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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters were great! But what surprised me was that Sesshy is already mated and has a pup on the way, so I'm wondering how they get together in the end. Wait, is this a Sesshy and Kagome fic? I can't remember if you said it was or not.
Anyways, I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Anyways, I look forward to reading the rest of it.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it, keep up the great work, and don't let those jerks get to to you. update soon
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can not wait for more of the story good luck on the story. up date soon it sound real good story to. good luck
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think its a good start plaese update soon
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love your idea of the story and I dont care what other people think. Keep writeing and I will keep reviewing. I also have a request will you make the story chapters longer and more decriptive please. I love the story its just that I think it could use a little improvement.Please dont get mad,but it is from a readers piont of view.
Keep wrighting,
Sweetbrook.
Keep wrighting,
Sweetbrook.
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good I also reviewed on Spark, don't pay attention to that person, there is always someone out there trying to cause a problem, anyway I love the story and I can't wait to you update again
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome first chapter! I really can't wait to read the rest of it. I've read the book and have watched the movie, and I really don't think your story will be like them, but more of your own original story. So I don't think you're plagiarizing at all. Anyways, I look forward to reading the next chapter soon!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Somebody actually accused you of plagarism?
Good grief. That would make nearly every author in existence guilty, as well.
There are plenty of books with the same "save the world" theme and it doesn't make the authors guilty of plagarism.
Who ever was dumb enough to accuse you of plagarism over an idea deserves a good swift kick in the hind end so don't let them get to you.
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What I have read so far I liked and would like to read more if you continue writing it.
Good grief. That would make nearly every author in existence guilty, as well.
There are plenty of books with the same "save the world" theme and it doesn't make the authors guilty of plagarism.
Who ever was dumb enough to accuse you of plagarism over an idea deserves a good swift kick in the hind end so don't let them get to you.
^.^
What I have read so far I liked and would like to read more if you continue writing it.
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
those 2 who said u plagiarized are retards! the face on the milk cartoon story had nothing about a girl being kidnapped by a MAN who took her for the sake of bearing his HEIR. maybe they should have actually tried reading the book or watching the lifetime movie. anyways, forget those losers, i cant wait to see how this one ends! :)