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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this and i hope that you update soon!
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember this story I was sad when I didn't see it anymore please if you can let me know when you update
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I need more. This is intelligent, and interesting.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it so please update soon. its really really really good.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've definitely fallen in love.. I beg for you to continue.
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, I beg of you. This story is so deliciously tantalizing. I swear I was practically salivating. Honestly, pure genius. It’s incredible that you could pinpoint Naraku’s character so precisely.
I mean really, all of what he is saying is so undeniably true, but you’ve managed to word it in such an inspiring, ideal way. It’s just so… so Naraku. Using the truth to deepen the already festering wounds inflicted upon his victims… I love it! I mean a lie is a lie, and though they hurt they are only fabricated words used to hurt others. But the truth… when the truth is used for the purposes of evil… it’s all the more crushing, no? Geez, you’re a regular Naraku yourself, aren’t you? You would make a great villain!
Anyways, I’m sure I’ve wasted enough time prattling on. I love your story. Please hurry and continue!!!
~ChaoticReverie
I mean really, all of what he is saying is so undeniably true, but you’ve managed to word it in such an inspiring, ideal way. It’s just so… so Naraku. Using the truth to deepen the already festering wounds inflicted upon his victims… I love it! I mean a lie is a lie, and though they hurt they are only fabricated words used to hurt others. But the truth… when the truth is used for the purposes of evil… it’s all the more crushing, no? Geez, you’re a regular Naraku yourself, aren’t you? You would make a great villain!
Anyways, I’m sure I’ve wasted enough time prattling on. I love your story. Please hurry and continue!!!
~ChaoticReverie
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was good! the reasoning and logic was so intensly evil, so utterly diabolical. to play on her sympathies, her affection and care for her companions... the guilt she'll feel if she doesn't comply, the guilt they, particularly miroku will feel if she does. it's a 'damned if you do, damned if you don't' situation... since accepted morals in the modern age has declined so, it wouldn't mean as much to her as it would to the others... his life vs. her innocence.
a deep and profound conundrum.
thank you,
ginny
a deep and profound conundrum.
thank you,
ginny
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo if you keep that up i wont be able to keep my self from wanting to know what happen next sssooo update soon cause i really really really want to know cause this is ...is something i dont know but great keep up the great work.
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... I almost don't really know what to say.
His plan is so well thought out. He know what he wants, and he plans to take advantage of his knowledge on their personal relationships and how the human mind and heart works within their group.
I can't wait to see more.
Where is this already posted at?
Take care.
His plan is so well thought out. He know what he wants, and he plans to take advantage of his knowledge on their personal relationships and how the human mind and heart works within their group.
I can't wait to see more.
Where is this already posted at?
Take care.