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this was the best story with the best intelactual and oratory language..... wow it was amazing... i would love to read more of it... ur skills and way with words is amazing....

Wow!
This is amazing! I have always avoided Nara/Kago fanfics. My friend recommended this and though I was sure that I will not like what I would read, I have to say that I am impressed! Amazing work. It was a great pleasure to read even this much, so I thak you!

I have read this many, many times over. It is pure genius. I love your portrayal of Naraku and Kagome and how you simply twist and taunt. It's amazing.
I wish you would finish this! Im curious as to the end. c:

-Eev

Oh my. I cant say that I have ever read something so wonderful. They are kept in character and everything. I love how you did this, everything make logical sense. I bow down to you and your awesomeness! =D Please continue this or something? Please? Thanks for such a wonderful story.

Oh my story is interestingly crafted as the play between naraku and kagome left me breathless, their play of thoughts, emotions, words and body language had me spinning and applauding your brilliant style of writing, as it makes the dance oh so much delicious. to bad u all but abandoned what promised to be an very good story if u had given it a chance, but if u can change your mind, update please.

Alright... so... there is more... right? Please... please... please update. If this is the end I will cry.
This story is so incredibly thought out. I can't even begin to describe how brilliant I think you are for having planned all of this out. Honestly. I'm reading it thinking to myself, 'Holy shit, this is such a bloody good plan.' It makes me wonder about you. How in the hell can someone actually be that precise and immaculate in regards to a fanfiction?
It's just too perfect. It's crazy. Love it.
Thank you for the breathtaking story... which I thoroughly hope continues.
ChaoticReverie~
P.S. Are you some kind of evil genius, because I find it hard to fathom that a regular person did something this spectacular?

Sigh, this story is sooo beautiful. I love how you wrote such a complicated and detail converstion that shows the mind of the characters. I hardly ever read any this GOOD. Usually, it is just a lemon scene with no plot or background. I really love a good story and this seems like such an promising one. PLEASE update. I hardly ever seegood ones and often times they are abandoned or discontinued which makes me sad.

Aki WildQueen
P.S. Mr. Bunny loved it too!
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Beautiful. Very well written and a very interesting plot I cant wait to read more!

That was amazing!!! After I finished reading the two chapters, I had only one thought going through my head. "Woah" Lol. This story truly is amazing, so please keep up the good, no wait,the awesome work!!!!

~Kagome

Excellent. Please write another chapter.