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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a fantastic story, I hope you keep up the job well done. I can't wait to read more of your stories in the future, I also wish you would keep writing on this story.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, whether it's angst, drama, or just plain smut, nobody does it better. You two are awesome. Yes, it was a little hard to see Kagome in this light, but what the hey? I did like the obvious affection Hiei showed for her. Hiei's manipulation of Yusuke was interesting. I was wondering just how far he was going to push it. His thoughts that Yusuke might actually enjoy being the submissive were interesting. Hmmm. I am wondering what you would put into a second chapter? Yusuke and Keiko? Obviously, Hiei would have to explain how the "training" works. Just wondering, does Kagome ever call Hiei by name? Do they ever spend time with the others? They must, and she must, since Yusuke didn't believe she would act like that. So, is Hiei just the master at home? Oh yeah -- got to mention the interesting tidbit about her former boyfrined introducing her to bondage. You woke me up there with a big "What?!!?" LOL! Who knew modern-day mikos were so kinky?
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done! I can't wait to see what else you two come up with!