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I just found this story and it saddens me to see how long it's been since it's been updated. Please update again? I'm really interested in the type of relationship that Hiei and Kagome have. I'm in a similar relationship myself, although it's more about serving my Master and him taking care of me. I would really like to know if you ever plan to update or at least, if you have updated this on another site, let us know?

Ah, it's such a shame you stopped updating before you posted the Hiei/Kagome action you mentioned at the end of the last chapter. As much as I enjoy the care put into the portrayal of Yuusuke and Keiko's burgeoning D/S relationship, I actually much prefer the type of D/S relationship you portray between Hiei and Kagome. I really enjoy reading back over those interactions when I'm in a crappy mood and need a little pick-me-up. Thank you! :)

i lllooovvveee this story make some more chapters

i love this story cant wait until next chapter

More, please? My S&M kink is starving for your smut!

I hate to admit it but I like this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Normally I don’t comment on reviews but I thought there were a few points made here that makes the story go completely out of context and turns it into something that it isn’t. Hiei never did make any indication that he wanted Kagome to leave, what he asked her was if she wanted to redefine the terms of their relationship, i.e. being able to keep certain things from each other. There is a difference. It was only in Kagome’s mind that she thought he didn’t want her anymore. Hiei had no way of knowing what she was thinking, she didn’t tell him until she gave her answer. No Dom that I am aware of is a mind reader, even Hiei, so at that point it was on Kagome to let him know. As far as her insecurities, no matter what security she has with him now, it doesn’t change that her past would continue to haunt her unless he invaded her mind with the Jagan, which he has not done. As far as Hiei helping with Keiko’s training, I can imagine how we would have been flamed by readers if he had threatened to kill her, much less how Yusuke would have reacted in the story. So we wrote it where Yusuke did ask for his help and he consented. And you’re correct group sex may not be a part of the mainstream D/s lifestyle but it is of some. Besides how could this have been written with no smut so to speak? There is more planned for the story but as to when it will be written neither of us is certain. We had a definite direction we wanted to take but this has forced us to think on whether or not more people have misunderstood our intentions with the story. If that is indeed the case and we have to rewrite what has already been written it's most likely going to take a while. With so many other stories needing attention making corrections and re-emphasizing certain points is going to have to be set aside until we have the time to do so.
Takhisiss

Hmmm. Very interesting. It seems you're turning your "smut without plot" into a real story. I didn't comment after the 2nd chapter, because it left me with some very mixed feelings. But after Hiei accusing Kagome of violating their agreement in this chapter, I gotta say it. I'm not at all surprised that Keiko wasn't really getting it, because at the party, she wasn't really going for the BDSM lifestyle -- she was enjoying the group sex. Which really isn't part of BDSM -- at least not usually. I was disturbed by Kagome's thoughts that she might actually be jealous of Hiei spilling his seed on Keiko, but that she understood he was doing it for Yusuke. The reason why that is disturbing is because I think that was actually probably a case of HIM violating their agreement. He asked her to share herself with Yusuke and she did, FOR HIM. She wanted him to be proud of her. But for him, as the master, to voluntarily be with another woman would be an indication that Kagome wasn't enough for him -- in spite of the fact that she is an awesome submissive. It seems to me that she would feel she had failed him, and that he wanted someone else. As a master, in that instance, I think he failed her -- that's part of the trust between them, and he broke it then. Yusuke really wasn't getting it then, either, because he was asking Keiko how she'd like to have both of them. Again, that's not BDSM -- that's just group sex. And he was really making a big assumption there that Hiei would do it. I would hope he wouldn't, because seriously, he should be well-satisfied with Kagome. I was very interested in the brief glimpse we got into Kagome's background in the third chapter. And you referred to Hiei as her mate. If that's the case, then would he really make her leave? Apparently, she thought he would. Part of the appeal of the submissive role is the security it offers, so it was hard to see how very insecure she is even in this relationship. Somehow, somewhere, Hiei doesn't seem to be fulfilling her needs. (The broken trust issue?) Now, Yusuke finally got into it in the third chapter, and Keiko seems to be coming around. But that was a REALLY interesting part about her being attracted to Kagome. I really get the feeling that Kagome just loves Hiei, and while she might indulge him by being with others for his sake, I don't think she's really into it. So, the question becomes: what is Hiei going to do now? Because I think he's pushing the edge of the trust issue that's so central to a dominant/submissive relationship. I look forward to you diving a little deeper into their particular situation. And I am amazed at what this little story has become. You guys rock!