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A reaaly great story. I look forward to read more.

I think you resolved the Inuyasha/Kagome situation very well. She's still immature (which I expected), but she was able to put her hurt aside and try to be friends with Inuyasha after all that had happened. I'm glad that the two of them have everything out in the open so that they both can begin to heal.

On another note--I knew any relationship between the two was doomed when the well was blocked. Instead of thinking about Naraku, Kagome automatically assumed Inuyasha did it because of his inability to understand her feelings. I know he blocked the well before, but when he did so, it was for her own good so it was disheartening and an example of how young she truly is that she responded in such a manner.

You develop very good ideas of plot, never already read and, well, it's a pleasure. I like your story and I hope it'll run smoothly...
Just a little point : could you keep an eye on the words "though" and "thought(s)", etc. ?? You're mixing the two oddly (grammarly speaking) ... Thank you for you story !

A french mother and reader,
Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth

I'm loving the fast updates and the story itself. Well can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

Oooo... The intrigue! I do like where this is going. I do love your scenes with Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. They're all hot and steamy...

whooops, accidentally pressed done when I still had more review to write, so I had to delete it and start over!!

I love this story, but I think I had a harder time with the reactions in this chapter. more with inuyasha's reaction to kagome. Oh...would she clue in enough that if the well was destroyed in the past, it would no longer be there in the future? I wondered about that. I think...I don't know...I think the last part was what got me. If someone told me they thought something I did was disgusting, and I'm normally a fairly volatile and really sensitive person, and they ask me if we can be friends...i don't think I'd have a definitive answer. I think that was what threw me off. I like the added tension with naraku and well, however, and i am most definitely looking forward to seeing more of sessh. and inu!

This is one of my fav fics that I check up on regularly I hope Inu doesn't go back to kagome, he should stay with Sess. he has been hurt enough and good thing he heard what she said so he would know for himself what she thinks.

omg u hav to update soon. i mean dang man. first kikyo and now kagome. poor inu he has no one to turn to...unless sesshy takes both their places XD. and wat kagome said was so mean and i would think she's more open-minded but i guess not. great story so far

Another excellent chapter I still don't want inu and Kagome to get together she's evil.

I'm not a manga reader (not for this cartoon anyway). so I dont know about this new character that naraku has up here. When did Kagura die? Great chapter though.