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by chuji

person nika1280
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Suddenly, Sesshomaru felt very, very stupid.

LOL. I laughed at Sesshomaru for the first half of this chapter, then I wanted to rage against him for the second half. Damn, he's such a bastard. Couldn't he just tell Inuyasha that he finds his behavior unacceptable in a nicer way? I mean, I'm not asking for flowers and romance, but just a little less bastardliness. Oh well, that's Sesshomaru for you. I do feel sorry for Inuyasha--he was mated against his will and told he's an unfit parent. Poor Inuyasha--he just needs a hug (and some good loving to take his mind off things).

I wonder what Naraku is thinking...Whatever it is, it can't be good for Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. I just hope they get to pulverize that nasty spider in a most painful way. Hehe. Loved this chapter.
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good...I cant wait to see what the plan is. This chapter was kinda funny though.
person SammySan
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
JAJAJA you did it really good. God this was really funny, I love them when they figth, Inuyasha is always like a baby and Seshummaru like a big men.

Uhhh Naraku, making evils plans..ummmm nothing new but..Inu is pregnant and is more weak and can be in danger bleeding being kidnapped...well please...make me happy. I love a Seshu all worried and loving and a Inuyasha like in....well pain.

Great chapter, good story.

PD: My english is not my usual language so sorry, I'm colombian so I'm a little slow.
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very nice chapter, I hope you update soon.
person szaugg
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww, baby time. all I can say is, more please!
person SammySan
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this chapter was really good. Just think in a worried Seshumaru for a pregnant and in danger Inuyasha is so great.
person KamakuraYumi
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... Are they going to play tag again? Sorry! Anyway... Poor Inuyasha! He's all confused and upset... I quite liked the Shippo/Inuyasha interaction. The part about his scent just cracked me up! All of them babying him, following him around and generally annoying the hell out him was seriously funny and cute... More!
person KIKI441
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was so great. i just wish there was another
chapter. but i can't wait to see what happens
when sesshomaru finds out he is going to be a
'Daddy.'
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated I hope that Sess doesn't be to much of an a** when he finds out that Inu is with his child. Can't wait to read about the confrontation that's going to happen when he reaches Inu since Sess is full youki ?sp he should be able to tell that Inu is with his child without Inu even telling.

Waiting to find out what happens next, excellent fic.
person Madhater
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i hope you update soon i want to know what happens to inuyasha, and how his brother will act at hearing the news ^_^