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Fascinating story idea. Always sucks when the antagonist is/was a god. Curious to learn more about the first miko with visions and her Chosen One's relationship. Like did it take them longer or shorter to reach an accord than Kagome and Sesshomaru, how much stronger had they managed to increase their bond, and what happened to them that caused their end? Obviously the miko must have met her end as other miko had visions after her.

Please return to this story and thanks for writing!

This story is possibly the best and most unique story that I have ever read!!!!

This story line is one that i would have never thought of, or have ever read about.

I enjoy the OOC-ness in some places of this story, and I love how you keep it in character in places too, the combination of both is satisfying!!

I'm on the edge of my chair reading this, and I'm getting hot and bothered with the tension in the air with kag/sess.
I really hope that you continue this GREAT story because I would be very upset and disappointed that such a well wrote and unique story was cut down in it's prime =)

Please put me out of my misery and update again SOON!!!
Thank you!!!

I must say it's a very interesting story, I loved reading it up till now and can't wait till there is more coming out.

Please continue this! This is one of the BEST Sess/Kags fic I have read in a LONG time!

I love this story! It's so wonderfully original and well written; unlike any fic I've ever come across. I've got to ask, because I see it's been a while since you've updated, are you planning on continuing with this? Please tell me you have not abandoned it, that would just be too tragic. To waste such a magnificent piece of art just seems criminal to me, and it's so hard to find a good Sess/Kag story.
If you could reply and let me know what you intend to do, whether its discontinue or whatever, that would be phenomenal. I would hate to wait in suspense for the next entry if you have no intention of continuing.
Thanks!
ChaoticReverie

*wiggles happily* I just keep on rereading this story. It's absolutely wonderful and imaginative...though I get the anxious feeling that Kagome's soul is just what the miscreants are looking for- and I don't want her to get hurt! She's had so much trouble in her life... hopefully Sesshoumaru will be able to use the courting time to get more protective because he understands how unwanted she feels...and maybe she can help him loosen up.
Looking forward to your update!
~Mishka

This is SO good, I couldnt stop reading once I started as was disappointed when I had to stop! I cant wait to find out what happens next, please continue!

god bless wiccan.
mujitsu, i'm one of the ones who has been waiting 3 months for the update and wiccan is right, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! sorry for yelling. you wouldn't have this problem if you weren't such a good storyteller, so you have only yourself to blame. and you know, after you finish this one, a whole lot of readers are going to be looking for more stories from you. again, if you weren't good, we wouldn't care! this is a particularly good tale too. so thank you for another chapter [and i really enjoyed it] and i will keep looking for updates.
bless you wiccan.

so what do you do in your spare time?

This is a really good story. I understand why you've been nominated for awards on different sites. However, lovely as those awards might be, you have something better: the gift of being a true storyteller. That you can create such an intriguing and capitivating tale as this and express it so well in a foreign language is a testament to your gift. Your language skills surpass those of many for whom English is their native language. There are a few technical errors in your writing, but all you need is a proofreader. A good proofreader can catch 75% of the errors, a great proofer can catch maybe 85%, so it's always good to have 2.

And let me know when you decide to start writing murder mysteries professionally. I will be delighted to pay to read your work. In the meantime, please keep finding the time to continue this story. It is so good and I am sooo addicted.

Very interesting story. It seems like you have some difficulty with the number of characters jumping in and out of the scene, but I'm glad you included most everyone from the group. I loved the scene where Kagome jumped between Inuyasha and Kouga! Nice spunk shown there. Good work and I'm glad it's being recognized by the fandom.