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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, fer sure. So I take it you are enjoying my works.
I'm gladddddd It's so hard to find time, but I've been so motivated to write it's insane.
Hope to hear from you soon.
<3 Heather.
I'm gladddddd It's so hard to find time, but I've been so motivated to write it's insane.
Hope to hear from you soon.
<3 Heather.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEp! that was great! :-) I'm glad you added a bit more detail here and there, it really helps the flow. Can't wait for your next chapter!! And sorry 'bout the mini lectures... even my husband thinks I'm a bit obsessive about the grammar thing.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ginduf @ gmail . com
i will beta for you, however i will not beta lemons.
ginny
i will beta for you, however i will not beta lemons.
ginny
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Would you mind if I offered to Beta? I'm not too bad, I'm a writer myself and once got an "award" for editing in HS. Which was about 10 years ago, but hey, it still happened! So check my profile and e-mail me if you're interested?
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BTW, did I mention I really like the story so far? I honestly didn't notice all that many mistakes, but then I was totaly caught up in the plot.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think you are in SERIOUS need of a beta, you just need to change a few things.
one thing that may irritate people is the fact that you don't correctly space your dialogue,
you should start a new sentence with every new speaker.
Other than that, it's not so terrible that it's unreadable. Trust me, I've seen those.
anywho, yeah. I would hella help you out, but I'm having trouble finding the time to finish all of my stories,
working and being in college is a bitch lol
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ps, your title confuses me... is ame a word?
one thing that may irritate people is the fact that you don't correctly space your dialogue,
you should start a new sentence with every new speaker.
Other than that, it's not so terrible that it's unreadable. Trust me, I've seen those.
anywho, yeah. I would hella help you out, but I'm having trouble finding the time to finish all of my stories,
working and being in college is a bitch lol
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ps, your title confuses me... is ame a word?
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha, shit, I'll help beta the lemons though.
gladly.
^_^
I can find time for that, read some of my stories and tell me what you think of some of my lemons.
gladly.
^_^
I can find time for that, read some of my stories and tell me what you think of some of my lemons.
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very good so far. If you are still looking for a beta, I would love to be one for you. Just send me an email to let me know.
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, a few spelling grammar errors but.. nice. can't wait for more.
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! You set it up nicely. I like the way we got to see what Kagome was thinking,and then Inuyasha's thoughts. The revelation about how his feelings have been changing about Kikyou's touch and scent and even the the cold way she talks. Really good!