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if he was a fox he would call her a vixen, he's a dog she's going to be his bitch... wouldn't it be obvious to her.

poor perpetually horney yasha never gets a break. good chapter.

happy healthy reward and encouragement (bribe) to continue: chocolately goodness!

::chocolate coma::
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

thank you,
ginny

Keep up the good work hun. I'm glad to see you intend to finish the story. Hope you had fun on your trip regaurdless.

your really descriptive and get the point across!! pretty damn good, i cant do that im just a goofy guy sittin in his room because...his mom and sister bitched him out but thats not the point, point is this story is really good...and who cares for a lemon just your skills and creativity alone make it interesting as hell, and your the first to really talk about his age... but come to think of it wouldnt he be like 90? if he was 40 b4 being pinned to the tree? lol

This story is going very well. Your writting is very good. I'm enjoying all the feeling coming out. It's about time. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.

love the way you had him explain his feelings... poor guy was just a kid when he was forced to live alone and fend for himself, very little social interaction so he would have problems communicating being only a small part of his problems... trust issues would be a greater problem and kagome's feelings are not primarily for what he can be but for what/who he is now and she dispite his mouth feels he is perfect as/who he is.

very eloquently expressed.

thank you,
ginny

AHHHH I CAN'T WAIT FOR 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!! *goes nuts*

ps... it's really good.....

good work so far i love the way Inu is finally expressing himself i'm definately gonna get my partner in crim to read this one

That chapter was GREAT! I loved it that for once, Inuyasha was the one who insisted they had to talk. I loved the way he thought out his feelings for Kikyo, and about all of his friends. And then he told Kagome about his feelings for Kikyo -- that was the single smartest thing he's ever done. And he told her he "Chooses" her, too. Woo hoo! That is going to change things a lot. She will be able to feel more secure in their relationship, and that confidence boost could even help her with her powers. Yes, they will still have obstacles to face -- including Kikyo and Kouga, but KNOWING what each other really thinks and feels will make a huge difference. This was a brilliant chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

This is most definetly a lovely story. I've never been all to fond of plots that just jump in to having sex. Your doing a wonderful job with the detail and everything. Please keep it up. I breaks my heart to see a good story start out but then the author leaves it unfinished for lack of enthusaim from others and such. I do hope to see this one completed. Thank you for writing!

Great Story!! I think it is great to first delve into the relationship and get things figured out before jumping into a lemon scene. Like they say good things come to those who wait!! Can't wait for updates!!