rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Now that is what i call a first chapter, Kamii, I can't wait to read the second chapter!

I am in love with your fic. last bit, ah..... wow. have i said that i'm in love? ^_^

I really like how you bring out the characters the way you do. I mean it. I think I have more respect for Kouga now just becuase of this chapter. Very cool!

please, please update soon. I really, really am lovin' this fic. it's just soo... damn cool. can't wait to read the next chapter. laters for now!

This chapter was definatly not a dissapointment. InuYasha's personality (in my opinion) was without fault. The way he feels about his life and the reasons for keeping everything to himself were exactaly what I look for in a fanfic. I also found it quite interesting to see the way you played out InuYasha's last memories of his mother. There aren't many fanfics that delve too deeply within his mother's part of the story line, and while you did not indulge in that aspect of InuYasha's life too much you tied it in in a very managable way. All together it was pretty much seemless with his thoughts and how you tied it all together. The only surprise was how you involved Shippo in all of this, it was somewhat out of left field how you ended this chapter, but depending on how you tie it together in the next one it really shouldn't matter much.
Great job and keep up the consistancy of staying in line with the actual anime.

Very well done!
I love that you weave in background, as well as showing
his more feral side. How his instincts kick in, and cause
him to react to both people and situations.
Good to see him (and her)in a more mature light, willing to
deal with their problems and confusion (no matter how reluctantly).

I also think it's good that they aren't rushing into sex, too
many fics do this, without them working out their true feelings
and dealing with the matters at hand. This makes for great angst
and misunderstandings later, but it's really nice to read a story
where they take it slowly. Getting there is half (or more) the fun!

Will be eagerly watching for more of this, just wish AFF had a fave/update
feature, sigh......

this is a really good storryyy.
it's written pretty well, although a few grammatical things, but nothing serious. just your that should be you're and the like.
but I really like the idea.

All things considered you did a great job of keeping Koga and InuYasha in character through this chapter. Though I usually prefer fanfics were Koga gets the shit beaten out of him, this was more as to what would have happened if it were actually part of the anime series. I hope you plan on running with this story for quite a few more chapters (I tend to like stories in the 20ch range), it looks very promising so far and I have not been disappinted as of yet (a rarity for sure). I am looking forward to see how deep you get into the relationship between InuYasha and Kagome for that is one aspect of every fanfic that I tend to scrutinize most.

good story! can't wait for more :D