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for The Intertwined

by Sardave

schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o now i cant wait to find out what will happen next.
person Diane
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really like this & can hardly wait for more, do have a possible correction though. I don't think the seasons in Japan correspond to those in the US, Canada & the UK, as in people in Australia which is in pretty much the same zone I do believe celebrates Xmas in the summer. So I don't think mid-November would be fall there although I'm not positive. You may want to check on that, or not depending on how accurate you want to be.
person VixenOfTheFlame
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luved it
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. this keeps getting better and better!!
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a hint at the group/family in the last chapter... wondering if sesshomaru is of that number. are you going to give us a little background on his accquantance with youko as hinted, it had most likely been a good thing that it had been a while since they'd seen eachother?

exciting chapter, i can't wait to read more.

thank you,
ginny
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im very excited to find out what will happen next. please update as soon as u can.
person VixenOfTheFlame
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luv it! I hope ure muse works a bit faster next time too. update soon.
person swasdiva
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freaking fantastic insertion of Kurama...what a twist! But the foreboding about Sango and Kagome has me curious and worried.
This story just gets more enthralling with each chapter. Keep it up!
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this just gets more interesting as it goes along, i love the hints you drop now and again in the story, they are intriguing.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the evil is revealed and naraku is behind it...

way to make yasha uncomfortable! >=)

happy healthy update reward/encouragement (bribe) to continue: chocolately goodness!

::chocolate coma::
12 oz silken tofu
12 oz melted chocolate chips
whipped to a fluffy froth
refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

thank you,
ginny